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Sun of Earth



God’s Sun of Earth, you've caught us in your gravity,
Like tethered on a string, we’re pulled around your glow,
Your light and energy support all living things...  
You are the center of our Galaxy, we know.

Our Sun, God’s beacon shining down on us each day
Embraces us in warmth and knowledge that His gift
Holds answer to the way our Galaxy exists
With Sun, the center of all life, in space adrift.

We look for you at break of dawn each brand new morn
And feel the surge of hope you bring for our new start;
Your brilliant rays above the clouds take breath away…
We feel the reign of God behind your beating heart.

At sunset in the soothing glow of earthly dusk,
We feel the calmness that flows through our quiet soul…
Our God of glory reigns within your dimming light
To grant the peace of night and wake refreshed and whole.

Oh, Sun of Earth, you've caught us in your gravity;
the hand of God created life for us through you…
The miracles of life sustained by Sun’s great force
Were planned and shaped by our Creator’s imaged view.


May 15, 2015

Iambic Hexameter


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:02 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
Haight Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Hi Funom, so nice of you to stop by to read my poem. I appreciate your uplifting comments and support. Sandra
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May 24, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Linda, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Sandra congs on winning too dear Hugs from, #8ryan
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Bryan, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Nice win. SKAT
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Skat, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Thanks, Jan. Still trying to catch up! Thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:56 PM
The words are descriptive and flaunt their message onto the page with self-assurance and a splash of wisdom that captures the reader's imagination and attention. Well chosen words come alive in the reading and we cannot suppress a nod of agreement at the descriptive narration. Emile.
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Emile, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. I really appreciate it. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Yes, the sun is a true miracle on our earth and its likeness to "son" of God even gives more impact to a poem like this one, sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so much for your nice comment. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Muideen Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:43 PM
WoW! a very interesting and enjoyable piece. excellent work........good luck in the contest.
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Thank you so much, Afolabi, for your visit and uplifting comments. I really appreciate it. Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your visit and positive comment. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 1:41 PM
such a beautiful spiritual take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Hi Jan, thank you! So pleased that you like it! Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:40 PM
This is so lovely!! All the best!! :D :D
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Hi Sneha, so nice of you to stop by with your encouraging comment and best wishes! Hugs, Sandra
Das Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:33 PM
I feel a sense of peace and joy surround me as I read your beautiful poem. A truly beautiful piece. 7. A fav.
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Hi Nandita, as always, I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments and support. Thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
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