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Sun Ocean Cycle

Sun Ocean Cycle - Haiku seas boil, drain happy thirsty sun, laughs and laps waves drinks excess, rains come

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/25/2014 2:37:00 PM

The rain cycle you have proven to be much simpler then we were taught. You described it perfectly in this little Haiku. Well done Earl

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 5:39:00 PM

Hi Brenda. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was simply a playful haiku. Like your said, simple and descriptive...and for me, fun. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 12:07:00 PM

beautifully penned haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 1:25:00 PM

Hi Jan, I appreciate you kind words. Thanks. This is one of my dream haiku creations. I go to sleep with the idea of the evaporation of the water on the ocean and the sun's relationship to that process. When I wake up I formulate the cycle of life with those elements with nature and then toy with them for awhile. I'm glad you liked it. See ya! Earl

David Meade

Date: 11/25/2014 11:01:00 AM

I have been reading Chief Settle and you this haiku reminds of his speeches . . . nicely done.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/25/2014 1:29:00 PM

Hi David. Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked it. This is just a simple cycle of life item that I put together for fun. Have a great day. Earl