Sun Never Rises

My days feel like nights

My nights never saw the day

For sun never rises

On clouds so gray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 11:19 PM
Just make one correction in your second line: replace "seen" with "saw". This little poem looks better with proper grammar.
Moore Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 1:29 PM
this isnt bad just wish you would elaborate more.
Eastman Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Sad but well written. A thought we can all relate to.
Long Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Thank you
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