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Sun Kissed and Star Dusted Air Castles

She is whimsical midst-escaping blackness & beige stagnation, reverberant betwixt musicality & fictitious paisley fabrications, recognizes the actuality of her enigmatic spirit's frivolity, well-defined by her quirky quintessence serving her far beyond periods of reflective flourishes, has never been a slave to social expectations nor gravitas of worldly-minded undertakings, materialism is not her cuppa tang nor an applicable proposition, heartfelt inclination is e'er creation and the freedoms it relishes, you may catch glimpses midway seascapes & ocean's roar or summits of splendiferous mountain's sumptuous loftiness, swaggers 'bout configurations and milky way's artsy effulgence, plays amidst wistful forests with nymphets and poisonous toadstools sashays 'round wildflower meadows blanketed yonder moon blushes, sun-kissed & star dusted she's collectively nightfall 'pon daylight, envisages building soaring air castles amidst macrocosms high-rise skies' timelessness whence humankind shall humbly recognize enlightened ceremony of incommensurate resoluteness & obsessive commitment furthermost nature's conceptualizations
Building Castles in the Sky Contest -Steven Henderson

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Date: 1/4/2017 6:24:00 PM
Very impressive, imaginative and well-written, Paloma. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:09:00 PM
Well done congrats x
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Date: 1/4/2017 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Paloma:-) hugs Eve
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:27:00 AM
I like the message, the quality and the style of your poem. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:42:00 AM
- This is a wonderful poem Paloma, a truly unique write ! - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:15:00 AM
Same to you Anne-Lise, thanks for the sweet review! :)
Date: 11/2/2016 10:45:00 PM
I read this four times - it has some great imagery, absolutely breathtaking and thought provoking imagery. I may read it again when I've had morning coffee, but for now it delighted my imagination and impressed me ... CayCay
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:14:00 AM
Wow four times, I'm honored, thanks so much CayCay!
Date: 11/2/2016 2:26:00 PM
Iove your grand vocabulary...and unique style Paloma..She is all woman...: )
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine, your review made me smile! :)
Date: 11/2/2016 2:12:00 PM
overloaded with fancy words, paloma.. great stuff!..huggs
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette! :)
Date: 11/2/2016 9:39:00 AM
A parade of spectacular sentences that dazzle the mind of the uninitiated! Impressive dear, Paloma! Good luck!
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:11:00 AM
Much appreciated Demetrios!
Date: 11/2/2016 8:51:00 AM
Blinded by the light, your poem shines today dear Paloma. There is always so much to find when reading one of your works. "She" sounds quite interesting and complicated at the same time. I just re-read trying to pick out one line that stuck to me, but ended up peeling the entire poem from my skin. Good luck in the contest, this is definite winner.
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:10:00 AM
Oh I love that, peeled from your skin, many thanks Chris!
Date: 11/2/2016 8:30:00 AM
Excellent imagism. Well penned and powerful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/2/2016 8:23:00 AM
"Nymphets and poisonous toadstools", eh? At least now I know where to find her. fun read Paloma:)
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:09:00 AM
She hangs out there a lot. :) Merci Danny.
Date: 11/2/2016 7:38:00 AM
She's all that and so much more! Wonderful and powerful and fast-paced. Good Luck!
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Darren, I'm glad you thought so!

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