Sun Kissed and Star Dusted Air Castles

She is whimsical midst-escaping blackness & beige stagnation, reverberant betwixt musicality & fictitious paisley fabrications, recognizes the actuality of her enigmatic spirit's frivolity, well-defined by her quirky quintessence serving her far beyond periods of reflective flourishes, has never been a slave to social expectations nor gravitas of worldly-minded undertakings, materialism is not her cuppa tang nor an applicable proposition, heartfelt inclination is e'er creation and the freedoms it relishes, you may catch glimpses midway seascapes & ocean's roar or summits of splendiferous mountain's sumptuous loftiness, swaggers 'bout configurations and milky way's artsy effulgence, plays amidst wistful forests with nymphets and poisonous toadstools sashays 'round wildflower meadows blanketed yonder moon blushes, sun-kissed & star dusted she's collectively nightfall 'pon daylight, envisages building soaring air castles amidst macrocosms high-rise skies' timelessness whence humankind shall humbly recognize enlightened ceremony of incommensurate resoluteness & obsessive commitment furthermost nature's conceptualizations
Building Castles in the Sky Contest -Steven Henderson
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Haight Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Very impressive, imaginative and well-written, Paloma. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Well done congrats x
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your win,Paloma:-) hugs Eve
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January 4, 2017 at 2:27 AM
I like the message, the quality and the style of your poem. Congratulations, Kai
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November 5, 2016 at 8:42 AM
- This is a wonderful poem Paloma, a truly unique write ! - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 5, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Same to you Anne-Lise, thanks for the sweet review! :)
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November 2, 2016 at 10:45 PM
I read this four times - it has some great imagery, absolutely breathtaking and thought provoking imagery. I may read it again when I've had morning coffee, but for now it delighted my imagination and impressed me ... CayCay
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November 5, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Wow four times, I'm honored, thanks so much CayCay!
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November 2, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Iove your grand vocabulary...and unique style Paloma..She is all woman...: )
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November 5, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Charmaine, your review made me smile! :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 2:12 PM
overloaded with fancy words, paloma.. great stuff!..huggs
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November 5, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Thanks so much Nette! :)
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November 2, 2016 at 9:39 AM
A parade of spectacular sentences that dazzle the mind of the uninitiated! Impressive dear, Paloma! Good luck!
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November 5, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Much appreciated Demetrios!
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November 2, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Blinded by the light, your poem shines today dear Paloma. There is always so much to find when reading one of your works. "She" sounds quite interesting and complicated at the same time. I just re-read trying to pick out one line that stuck to me, but ended up peeling the entire poem from my skin. Good luck in the contest, this is definite winner.
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November 5, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Oh I love that, peeled from your skin, many thanks Chris!
Sathasivam Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Excellent imagism. Well penned and powerful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Turner Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:23 AM
"Nymphets and poisonous toadstools", eh? At least now I know where to find her. fun read Paloma:)
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November 5, 2016 at 9:09 AM
She hangs out there a lot. :) Merci Danny.
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November 2, 2016 at 7:38 AM
She's all that and so much more! Wonderful and powerful and fast-paced. Good Luck!
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November 5, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Darren, I'm glad you thought so!
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