Sun I

triglycerid iris
diamond-like triptych
incandescent indigo
impure purple libido
instantaneous dismal thanatos
shore of boiling ebb
black iris
lucid sun

triptych purple indigo iris
impure  libido
boiling incandescent
instantaneous shore iris-sun
gleaming black reflux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 11:56 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:23 PM
DINA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 12:01 AM
Dina, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Mehta Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 1:43 PM
please give once over to the rhyme scheme and structure of the Italian sonnet, Dina
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