Sun Fuzzes

Brilliant light beaming,
Casting rays upon the Earth,
Dust particles shine.

Nathan Bane Leccese
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:23 PM
Again I read your work with humility, and thank you for honoring me in your contest. I was awy for 2 weeks and i snow catching up on my reading. May you be bless.
Moreno Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 1:01 AM
The dust particles is creative, nice work as always...Raul
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June 24, 2009 at 6:46 AM
I think that it is so funny that you wrote a haiku because of one of our children's cartoons. LOL it is wonderful though. Lots of Love, Misty
Gorelick Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 8:57 PM
Isnt it an amazing sight? this is very, very good. BG
Fraser Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 8:33 AM
As much as i hate dust, there's something special watching them in flight in sunlight. Like drifting souls who finally settle, great Haiku Nathan>>James
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June 20, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Just let them dust particles shine and keep on writing. Creative view in this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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June 20, 2009 at 10:18 AM
OOOOOOO Amaszin!Totally Lovin' The ignition Lights<3
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