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Sun Fuzzes

Brilliant light beaming, Casting rays upon the Earth, Dust particles shine. Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 06/15/09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/27/2009 10:23:00 PM
Again I read your work with humility, and thank you for honoring me in your contest. I was awy for 2 weeks and i snow catching up on my reading. May you be bless.
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Date: 6/25/2009 1:01:00 AM
The dust particles is creative, nice work as always...Raul
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Date: 6/24/2009 6:46:00 AM
I think that it is so funny that you wrote a haiku because of one of our children's cartoons. LOL it is wonderful though. Lots of Love, Misty
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Date: 6/21/2009 8:57:00 PM
Isnt it an amazing sight? this is very, very good. BG
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Date: 6/21/2009 8:33:00 AM
As much as i hate dust, there's something special watching them in flight in sunlight. Like drifting souls who finally settle, great Haiku Nathan>>James
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Date: 6/20/2009 12:37:00 PM
Just let them dust particles shine and keep on writing. Creative view in this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 6/20/2009 10:18:00 AM
OOOOOOO Amaszin!Totally Lovin' The ignition Lights<3
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