Sun Dust

Sun dust in my room
Waving particles run
Like free thoughts
In sun light
Of the morning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 9:13 PM
like the sun dust such a happy hopeful imagery!! :)!~olive eloisa
Lindley Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 11:00 AM
When no sunlight we are oblivious to those racing particles. Yet when the light enters wisdom is found. A perfect illustration of the greatness of finding the Light. A7, a short but very deep poem my friend.
Nunez Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 5:08 AM
Yes...I can see it! Good pen, sire. 7 . Kim :)
Camacho Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Mario,beautiful pened enjoyable verse..thanks Tonytocaa
Smith Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Isn't it amazing to all that is visible in the air when we see it in the sunlight. Nice pen Mario....Tim
Kiser Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 1:06 PM
That is adorable...and so accurate. You've painted your poem perfectly.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 11:41 AM
- Mario, a beautiful little poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Paz Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 6:01 AM
Thank you for your kindness
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