Sun Dust

Sun dust in my room Waving particles run Like free thoughts In sun light Of the morning

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/23/2015 9:13:00 PM

like the sun dust such a happy hopeful imagery!! :)!~olive eloisa

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/18/2015 11:00:00 AM

When no sunlight we are oblivious to those racing particles. Yet when the light enters wisdom is found. A perfect illustration of the greatness of finding the Light. A7, a short but very deep poem my friend.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/18/2015 5:08:00 AM

Yes...I can see it! Good pen, sire. 7 . Kim :)

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/17/2015 8:17:00 AM

Mario,beautiful pened enjoyable verse..thanks Tonytocaa

Tim Smith

Date: 4/16/2015 2:24:00 PM

Isn't it amazing to all that is visible in the air when we see it in the sunlight. Nice pen Mario....Tim

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/16/2015 1:06:00 PM

That is adorable...and so accurate. You've painted your poem perfectly.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2015 11:41:00 AM

- Mario, a beautiful little poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/18/2015 6:01:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness