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Sun Drops

The blooming pansies Search through the heavy rainstorm For a drop of sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 2:19:00 PM
awesome title! ...Sun Drops! love just saying it! when spoken, rocks! jim
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Date: 10/8/2009 3:20:00 PM
missed this one... the sun always shine after any storm. i love the view ,quite optimistic. i love it... love the sun and its glowing warmth- excellent Sun Drops,nicely described-Charma
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:57:00 AM
Are you that drop? Awesome write Raul, as always.....:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:32:00 AM
Lovely, awesome imagery, Raul! Sigh...! I love the title! What a beautiful phrase "Sun Drop" is! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/7/2009 4:21:00 PM
Thanks for you kind words about Unquestioning Patriots. I have been out of the loop since I moved to North Carolina. I really enjoyed this poem, since my wife just planted some pansies. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 10/7/2009 3:33:00 PM
This is a very lovely haiku write, excellent imagery, perfect 5/7/5 syllable count. It is a pleasure to have read for you. I thank you Raul for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/7/2009 1:50:00 PM
And that they do Raul, along with all our other wonderful plants, lovely Haiku >> James
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Date: 10/7/2009 1:12:00 PM
Another drop of perfect 5-7-5 , from the Master .....
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:44:00 PM
You bring sun into evr'yone's day with these writes......
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:37:00 PM
Bring em on Raul. I will read em. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:06:00 PM
You keep coming up with these wonderful poems. I enjoyed reading it and now I want a "Sun Drop" cola! lol...Thanks Raul...Marty
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:01:00 PM
I like it. Thank you for posting it.
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