Sun Drops

The blooming pansies
Search through the heavy rainstorm
For a drop of sun.

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James Marshall Goff

October 17, 2009 at 2:19 PM

awesome title! ...Sun Drops! love just saying it! when spoken, rocks! jim

Charmaine Chircop

October 8, 2009 at 3:20 PM

missed this one... the sun always shine after any storm. i love the view ,quite optimistic. i love it... love the sun and its glowing warmth- excellent Sun Drops,nicely described-Charma

Jared Pickett

October 8, 2009 at 10:57 AM

Are you that drop? Awesome write Raul, as always.....:JP]

Robin L. Gass

October 8, 2009 at 8:32 AM

Lovely, awesome imagery, Raul! Sigh...! I love the title! What a beautiful phrase "Sun Drop" is! Love, Robin

Gerard Keogh Jr.

October 7, 2009 at 4:21 PM

Thanks for you kind words about Unquestioning Patriots. I have been out of the loop since I moved to North Carolina. I really enjoyed this poem, since my wife just planted some pansies. Regards, Gerard

Adell Foster

October 7, 2009 at 3:33 PM

This is a very lovely haiku write, excellent imagery, perfect 5/7/5 syllable count. It is a pleasure to have read for you. I thank you Raul for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell