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Sun Does Not Die

The sun does not die at dusk goes and rest his light on the pure moon lap

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/14/2019 11:19:00 PM

Another beauty Alkas, but I would have written, "on her pure moon lap". Today, the 16th of July is full moon. I've always been a lunatic Alkas; so it was wonderful meeting mi Musa who, unknown to her, has always been lunastrating. How amazing to have a body so naturally intuned with the cycle of the spheres. One day it would be so cool to meet you and hang out on a full moon Alkas. Smiles

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/15/2019 9:24:00 AM

Yes, my dear Jeff, it's a fine line. but as I mentioned the sun enjoying the moon lap I say on the pure moon lap ... Thank you my friend. salute alkas