Sun Dial

Two clouds hugged the sun Sinking on the horizon Slipping day now done. 15.12.2020 HI-KU (2) Brian Strand.

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Date: 3/28/2021 7:21:00 AM

lovely~

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/28/2021 8:49:00 AM

Thanks Line...much appreciated

Date: 12/15/2020 2:25:00 PM

Loved the imagery of clouds hugging the sun and the way the haiku flows from day to twilight. Best wishes for the contest!

Carol Mitra
Date: 12/17/2020 4:52:00 AM

Thanks Sam....much appreciated.

Date: 12/15/2020 7:53:00 AM

- A great one ... a winner ... good luck, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 12/15/2020 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise...hugs right back :)

Date: 12/15/2020 2:00:00 AM

cloud hugged the sun~ beautiful

Carol Mitra
Date: 12/15/2020 2:21:00 AM

Thanks Mahtab...Take care :)

Date: 12/15/2020 1:59:00 AM

A D O R A B L E... Enjoyed. God bless you

Carol Mitra
Date: 12/15/2020 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Regina dear....hugs :)