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Sun Dancing

Twirl across the fields
in an adoring frenzy.
Chill is forgotten.
Our feet sing like hummingbirds.
Sun fingers tickle our souls.



written Jan 6th,2014

Copyright © Deb Wilson | Year Posted 2014

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Skat A Date: 2/11/2014 6:58:00 PM a nice little smile.. Deb. Love the tickling rays... ~ Love ~ SKAT Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/19/2014 2:59:00 PM This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 1/13/2014 10:58:00 PM Gorgeous depiction of sun dancing! Congrats, Deb! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/12/2014 5:57:00 PM Magic imagery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/12/2014 5:20:00 PM and another favorite expression, as Barbara mentions hers.....Sun fingers!! love those words! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 1/12/2014 2:52:00 PM the wonder of words put together to make "our feet sing"..congrats. BG Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 1/12/2014 2:15:00 PM This is awesome....congratulations Login to Reply

Roger Horsch Date: 1/12/2014 11:22:00 AM Nobody could have written a poem better than this. Congrats on your wonderful win. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/12/2014 8:12:00 AM Very beautiful, congratulation. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/12/2014 12:28:00 AM Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Deb Login to Reply

Amanda Reslink Date: 1/11/2014 11:50:00 PM This makes me think of that first really nice day of spring:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/11/2014 9:16:00 PM You really had me with those last two lines. Purely delightful imagery!!! Congrats on second place. Login to Reply Deb Wilson Date: 1/11/2014 9:19:00 PM thank you so much for appreciating my poem Andrea!!

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/6/2014 8:36:00 AM Nice joyful expressions, deb Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 1/6/2014 7:58:00 AM This piece was filled with such joy & warmth. Wonderful job! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/6/2014 4:34:00 AM Brilliant! This is such a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful and harmonious poem this one surely is, Great Work!! Login to Reply