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Sun Dancing

Twirl across the fields in an adoring frenzy. Chill is forgotten. Our feet sing like hummingbirds. Sun fingers tickle our souls. written Jan 6th,2014

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Date: 2/11/2014 6:58:00 PM
a nice little smile.. Deb. Love the tickling rays... ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2014 2:59:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/13/2014 10:58:00 PM
Gorgeous depiction of sun dancing! Congrats, Deb!
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:57:00 PM
Magic imagery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:20:00 PM
and another favorite expression, as Barbara mentions hers.....Sun fingers!! love those words! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2014 2:52:00 PM
the wonder of words put together to make "our feet sing"..congrats. BG
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Date: 1/12/2014 2:15:00 PM
This is awesome....congratulations
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Date: 1/12/2014 11:22:00 AM
Nobody could have written a poem better than this. Congrats on your wonderful win.
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Date: 1/12/2014 8:12:00 AM
Very beautiful, congratulation.
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Date: 1/12/2014 12:28:00 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Deb
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Date: 1/11/2014 11:50:00 PM
This makes me think of that first really nice day of spring:)
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:16:00 PM
You really had me with those last two lines. Purely delightful imagery!!! Congrats on second place.
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Deb Wilson
Date: 1/11/2014 9:19:00 PM
thank you so much for appreciating my poem Andrea!!
Date: 1/6/2014 8:36:00 AM
Nice joyful expressions, deb
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Date: 1/6/2014 7:58:00 AM
This piece was filled with such joy & warmth. Wonderful job!
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Date: 1/6/2014 4:34:00 AM
Brilliant! This is such a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful and harmonious poem this one surely is, Great Work!!
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