Sun Dancing

Twirl across the fields
in an adoring frenzy.
Chill is forgotten.
Our feet sing like hummingbirds.
Sun fingers tickle our souls.



written Jan 6th,2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 11, 2014 at 6:58 PM
a nice little smile.. Deb. Love the tickling rays... ~ Love ~ SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 2:59 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Ligon Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 10:58 PM
Gorgeous depiction of sun dancing! Congrats, Deb!
Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Magic imagery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:20 PM
and another favorite expression, as Barbara mentions hers.....Sun fingers!! love those words! Congratulations!
Gorelick Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 2:52 PM
the wonder of words put together to make "our feet sing"..congrats. BG
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 2:15 PM
This is awesome....congratulations
Horsch Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Nobody could have written a poem better than this. Congrats on your wonderful win.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Very beautiful, congratulation.
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 12:28 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Deb
Reslink Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 11:50 PM
This makes me think of that first really nice day of spring:)
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:16 PM
You really had me with those last two lines. Purely delightful imagery!!! Congrats on second place.
Wilson Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:19 PM
thank you so much for appreciating my poem Andrea!!
Mehta Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Nice joyful expressions, deb
Tacito Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 7:58 AM
This piece was filled with such joy & warmth. Wonderful job!
Sivey Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 4:34 AM
Brilliant! This is such a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful and harmonious poem this one surely is, Great Work!!
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