Sun Cracks Horizon

black crow flies higher across morn's pastel pink sky... sun cracks horizon

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2012 3:05:00 PM

beautiful scene here, my friend - I can imagine seeing this from your porch : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/3/2012 1:18:00 PM

black and pink tinges... you make this piece so unique, sara... charmed!..:) huggs

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/3/2012 10:24:00 AM

Contemplative...nice Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2012 10:18:00 AM

I think you hit a homerun with this one, Sara. What a gem.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/3/2012 9:42:00 AM

Nice imagination wonderfully penned. Loved always, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/3/2012 8:47:00 AM

This is a perfect and tremendously delightful write my friend! I love how you used a crow for the bird of choice for this poem...that gives this a Halloween feel to it...or am I just thinking too much into it? The crow brings a stark contrast to the morning of pastel pink, where the sun cracks the horizon! Awesome flow of thought with this poem Sara! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!