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Sun and Sand Minichu

sun shining-toes in sand a heavenly day filled with much fun-food and love I feel grand the cool water flowing feels great against the sun hotter I play had so much fun day sun shining-toes in sand flowing feels great against the sun day Date Written: 1/5/2021 Honorable Mention win for this contest. Sun and sand Minichu Poetry Contest Judged: 2/3/2021 Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 2/5/2021 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/3/2021 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Paula! Linda
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/3/2021 8:00:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was great to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings.................
Date: 2/3/2021 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I felt I was in beach as I read this. I felt cold water, hot sun and had fun. Great write.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/3/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was great to have a win. Glad you like this fun beach write. Glad you were able to join me on the beach. Enjoy your day with blessings.................
Date: 2/3/2021 3:48:00 AM
Paula, Thanks for participating in my contest. All good with your Minichu except the alignment of rhyme of middle line of the first stanza with other two. Not sure if love rhymes well with sun and fun. Still, congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/3/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thank You, for your writing and for your congratulations. It was great to have a win in your contest. Glad you like this fun write. Sorry about the word Love. Many times I have a couple of rough copies. Guess I picked the wrong one. Enjoy your day with blessings.................
Date: 1/9/2021 2:45:00 PM
I can feel the sand in between my toes and the shock of cold water as I read this one. Feel joyful now.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/10/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. Let's run off to the the beach and put our toes in the sand????? Have wonderful day with blessings.................
Date: 1/7/2021 6:25:00 AM
Wonderful job here, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/7/2021 6:59:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this write. Have wonderful day with blessings.................
Date: 1/5/2021 4:29:00 PM
It’s a lovely way to spend a day, on the beach with toes in sand, wonderful... Belle
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Oh yes, the beach with toes in the sand and water. I miss it. Have wonderful day with blessings.................
Date: 1/5/2021 3:26:00 PM
Nicely done, Paula. It's a wonderful way to spend time on a nice beach day, toes in the sand
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2021 8:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. I love and miss the beach, sand and water. Have wonderful day with blessings.................