Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

Sun and Sand Minichu

of vast nature be part
hear the salty sea waves rush in with froth and foam
steer the heart

stretch out on sand
merge to make sea, sand and sun home
disband

go dive
swim, walk, sleep, roam
live

of vast nature be part,
merge to make sea, sand and sun home
live

6th placement
written 05/Jan/2021
Mohan Chutani sponsor

Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Sara Kendrick February 3, 2021 at 12:04 PM Creative way to go with this winner. Congrats on your place on the winners' list. Sara Krish Radhakrishna February 3, 2021 at 8:45 PM Thanks Sara! Pleased you like it!:)

Linda Alice Fowler February 3, 2021 at 7:19 AM I really enjoyed this one Krish, A fav for me. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Krish Radhakrishna February 3, 2021 at 8:45 PM Thanks Linda! making it fav is special! God bless

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2021 at 3:13 AM Krish, thanx for participating in my contest and discovering nature's vastness on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan Krish Radhakrishna February 3, 2021 at 8:44 PM Thanks Mohan! honoured my friend!

Anitha Jayasankar January 7, 2021 at 10:10 AM It always feels good to be a part of nature, one with nature Krishji. A good contender for the contest. I have never tried writing a Minichu format. Will have to try. Have a great day ~ Ani Krish Radhakrishna January 7, 2021 at 11:02 AM Thank you Ani! Yes please do try! It is challenging particularly the last syllable!! no harm in attempting!

Tom Cunningham January 6, 2021 at 6:18 AM A scene I never get tired of seeing Krish, the sand and the sound of waves crashing on the shore is so therapeutic. Good luck in the contest Tom Krish Radhakrishna January 6, 2021 at 11:57 PM Thanks Tom! we all evolved from the ocean, hence the attraction! Spent childhood near the ocean! so yes, love it!

Gershon Wolf January 5, 2021 at 7:45 PM A very nice minichu, Krish from you!! Take good care, Gershon Krish Radhakrishna January 5, 2021 at 9:53 PM Thanks Gershon! sea is our heart beat.