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Sun Golden, glorious Warming, burning, shining Day, bright, night, crescent Illuminating, shimmering, orbiting Silvery, shadowy Moon 18th May 2015

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John Michaels

Date: 4/8/2017 7:32:00 AM

This is such a lovely piece. Very impressed, Jan. All the best, John!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2017 7:35:00 AM

I really enjoy the challenge of writing different forms and diversifying from my usual style but humour will always be my preference:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 5:26:00 PM

From one to another beautifully covered Jan. The two most important planets to humans, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 5:29:00 PM

yes we can't live without them James:-) hugs jan xx

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 5/26/2015 4:17:00 AM

The divergence is revealing and lively..... great work here, Jan..... You're an amazing poet!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 6:40:00 AM

thank you so much for your lovely comment Wilfred:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/20/2015 12:42:00 PM

Oh! nice diamante of words with picture. Both sides are beautifully done. 7 and loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/19/2015 3:14:00 PM

I loved the wonderful imagery in your poem. Making this a favorite! Very nice work, Jan :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/22/2015 2:00:00 PM

Liam and I do have another poem on the way. I will be posting it soon :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 3:15:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Kelly - I can't wait to see your next pen with liam:-) Hugs Jan xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2015 7:50:00 AM

Jan, this a brilliant write, absolutely love it :) How I long for the sun as we are heading for Winter over here.. Hope the week will be a great one.. tc Wilma

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 10:47:00 AM

We are in Spring hopefully turning into summer in a few weeks time:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/19/2015 2:37:00 AM

- Good morning from Norway, Jan :) - A beautiful diamond! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 10:46:00 AM

Thankk so much for dropping by Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 5/19/2015 12:47:00 AM

This is such a breathtakinly beautiful poem. Awesome imagery. So captured by its beauty. 7...You excel in all forms...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 1:12:00 AM

Thanks Nandita - thought i would try something different for a change:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/18/2015 8:36:00 PM

Terrific Jan....I like the internal rhyme where you made the shift from day to night

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks Tim - the rhyme wasn't intentional it just happened like that:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/18/2015 8:17:00 PM

Oh, Beautiful my shining Star!!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 1:10:00 AM

So good you had to tell me twice lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/18/2015 8:13:00 PM

Beautiful

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 1:10:00 AM

thanks Arthur:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/18/2015 7:25:00 PM

A perfect harmony! :) :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 1:09:00 AM

Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2015 5:43:00 PM

a nicely done diamante, Jan!! The pictures are talking about astrology. The sun sign is the one we go by today: when I tell people I am a Virgo. But i heard many years ago, they would go by your moon sign. For me, that is Taurus!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2015 1:08:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/18/2015 4:04:00 PM

This Sun and Moon is filled with Heavenly Stars!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2015 4:32:00 PM

I have read some of the poems you suggested - I am very grateful people read and comment on my poems Judy:-) Hugs jan xx

Judy Konos
Date: 5/18/2015 4:11:00 PM

You should perhaps read some of the excellent poetry I have mentioned...The Lyrics will make you grateful and appreciate your next write....Smile Child of God

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2015 4:08:00 PM

I don't feel like a shiny star today - simply lacklustre not sparkling here lol:-( hugs Jan xx