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Sun and Moon

Sun
Golden, glorious
Warming, burning, shining
Day, bright, night, crescent
Illuminating, shimmering, orbiting
Silvery, shadowy
Moon


18th May 2015

moonsundiamante

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John Michaels

April 8, 2017 at 7:32 AM

This is such a lovely piece. Very impressed, Jan. All the best, John!

Jan Allison

April 8, 2017 at 7:35 AM

I really enjoy the challenge of writing different forms and diversifying from my usual style but humour will always be my preference:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

May 29, 2015 at 5:26 PM

From one to another beautifully covered Jan. The two most important planets to humans, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison

May 29, 2015 at 5:29 PM

yes we can't live without them James:-) hugs jan xx

Wilfred Aniagyei

May 26, 2015 at 4:17 AM

The divergence is revealing and lively..... great work here, Jan..... You're an amazing poet!!!

Jan Allison

May 26, 2015 at 6:40 AM

thank you so much for your lovely comment Wilfred:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

May 20, 2015 at 12:42 PM

Oh! nice diamante of words with picture. Both sides are beautifully done. 7 and loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison

May 21, 2015 at 9:37 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler

May 19, 2015 at 3:14 PM

I loved the wonderful imagery in your poem. Making this a favorite! Very nice work, Jan :)

Kelly Deschler

May 22, 2015 at 2:00 PM

Liam and I do have another poem on the way. I will be posting it soon :)

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 3:15 PM

Thanks for dropping by Kelly - I can't wait to see your next pen with liam:-) Hugs Jan xx

Wilma Neels

May 19, 2015 at 7:50 AM

Jan, this a brilliant write, absolutely love it :) How I long for the sun as we are heading for Winter over here.. Hope the week will be a great one.. tc Wilma

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 10:47 AM

We are in Spring hopefully turning into summer in a few weeks time:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 19, 2015 at 2:37 AM

- Good morning from Norway, Jan :) - A beautiful diamond! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 10:46 AM

Thankk so much for dropping by Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

May 19, 2015 at 12:47 AM

This is such a breathtakinly beautiful poem. Awesome imagery. So captured by its beauty. 7...You excel in all forms...

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 1:12 AM

Thanks Nandita - thought i would try something different for a change:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

May 18, 2015 at 8:36 PM

Terrific Jan....I like the internal rhyme where you made the shift from day to night

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 1:11 AM

Thanks Tim - the rhyme wasn't intentional it just happened like that:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

May 18, 2015 at 8:17 PM

Oh, Beautiful my shining Star!!!!!!

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 1:10 AM

So good you had to tell me twice lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

May 18, 2015 at 8:13 PM

Beautiful

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 1:10 AM

thanks Arthur:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

May 18, 2015 at 7:25 PM

A perfect harmony! :) :) hugs

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 1:09 AM

Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 18, 2015 at 5:43 PM

a nicely done diamante, Jan!! The pictures are talking about astrology. The sun sign is the one we go by today: when I tell people I am a Virgo. But i heard many years ago, they would go by your moon sign. For me, that is Taurus!!

Jan Allison

May 19, 2015 at 1:08 AM

Thanks Andrea for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

May 18, 2015 at 4:04 PM

This Sun and Moon is filled with Heavenly Stars!

Jan Allison

May 18, 2015 at 4:32 PM

I have read some of the poems you suggested - I am very grateful people read and comment on my poems Judy:-) Hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

May 18, 2015 at 4:11 PM

You should perhaps read some of the excellent poetry I have mentioned...The Lyrics will make you grateful and appreciate your next write....Smile Child of God

Jan Allison

May 18, 2015 at 4:08 PM

I don't feel like a shiny star today - simply lacklustre not sparkling here lol:-( hugs Jan xx

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