Debbie Duncan Poet Dramatic Verse

Sun and Moon

If you were the sun 
And I were the moon 
I'd lay here silently
Fade into you
I guess I wanted you more
Then what your heart could bare
You always said if I was by your side
You could climb the highest mountain
Streaking sunsets across the sky
Painting rainbows across my heart
You said there was beauty in my laugh
As true beauty came from my kindness
You are a dream inside of a dream
You are whispers on the wind to my heart 
Can you not find your way back to me 
I guess the road of us was too long 
For your heart to understand 


10 25  2012   Wednesday   9 pm

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Ken Carroll August 29, 2013 at 11:51 PM Hi Debbie, Wonderful write expressing love found and love lost... Ken.. Debbie Duncan October 1, 2013 at 12:42 AM Thank you Ken ;}

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2013 at 1:42 PM gosh, you are VERY good at the romantic poem genre. I love this one. A fave! Debbie Duncan January 11, 2013 at 6:11 PM Thank you Andrea ;}

Chipepo Lwele December 6, 2012 at 4:54 AM I LOVE IT ,KEEP IT UP.

Elizabeth Wesley November 13, 2012 at 4:26 PM Your "spur of the moment" words cast a spell reading the message in this. Has a feeling of angst and acceptance that leaves me feeling sad. Debbie Duncan November 13, 2012 at 5:39 PM Thanks for reading Liz ;} yes it is a bit sad, wanting more, I've been single about 6 yrs now. Before that We were together 17 years.

Skat A November 11, 2012 at 5:04 PM A very nice combination' hopefuly one can open their eyes, to everything that resides on the side of them. A very tasteful but sad poem. Have a nice day.~SKAT~ Debbie Duncan November 11, 2012 at 5:35 PM Thank ya SKAT ,,,, this is made up spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2012 at 4:11 PM Can it be more gorgeous .... Debbie, so glad I got to read this poem today, thank you! oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan November 9, 2012 at 5:46 PM Oh thank you Anne - Lise ,,, spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}

Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2012 at 6:39 PM Hello Debbie, wow...fading into each other... Now this is a verse I'd love to take notion with my fiance... when life faded in different directions... enjoyed..pd Debbie Duncan November 6, 2012 at 3:46 AM Hey Poet,,,,, thank you for always reading my words,,,, I wrote this on the spree of the moment as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome day .

Bukang Liwayway November 5, 2012 at 7:40 AM lovely poem friend Debbie..i like it. thanks fro sharing :) Debbie Duncan November 5, 2012 at 10:13 AM Well thank you Maria,,,,, I wrote it on spree of the moment, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome !

Bhavna Khemlani November 2, 2012 at 11:57 PM Hello Debbie, A nice one, some emotions are surely inexpressive and beyond our understanding. I like this. Debbie Duncan November 4, 2012 at 4:10 PM Thank Bhavna,,,, it was a spree of the moment write as I heard the words " sun and moon in my head. you have an awesome day " OK' ;}

Robert Pettit November 2, 2012 at 10:54 PM Nice imaginative write. Those two proximal heavenly bodies have inspired many great writes through the ages. This is one more for that very long list. Debbie Duncan November 2, 2012 at 11:29 PM Thank you so much Robert,,,, a complement like tat from you is awesome. Because I know "you" are a very good writer ;}