Sun

sunlight hits the morning dew
and I'm reminded
of the sparkle shining in your eye
an endless smile of admiration 
beaming down 
into the deepest recesses
of this aching soul
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October 5, 2023 at 2:54 PM
I hear Winter is approaching over there. Summer's already here, heatwave. I bought two new bathing costumes yesterday. Balmoral, morning swims commence. It's going to be a scorcher. Bushfire season fast approaches. I hope with not the same extent of horror that has hit other places globally this year. Our bushfires are notoriously ferocious and brutal when they do run riot.
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October 25, 2023 at 5:11 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/crazy_in_the_time_of_covid_1247877
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October 5, 2023 at 3:26 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/words_after_1272853
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October 5, 2023 at 3:23 PM
:)
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October 5, 2023 at 2:58 PM
I hear tinea powder works a treat.
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October 5, 2023 at 2:57 PM
I could go for a second summer, tomorrow night the temps are going to tumble...right now the window is open an my socks are off
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October 1, 2023 at 10:02 AM
I was all set to leave you a "it would be nice to see more of you here" but Jan's message mirrors my thoughts about you. Times change but people don't, not when friends are still happy to see each other. I still feel the same melancholy longing in your poetry... wishing someone worthy of winning your heart would knock on your door. Hugs.
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October 1, 2023 at 8:45 AM
aww another romantic gem from your pen I am so so glad to see you posting again TS, wish we would re create the old days when we had such fun but times have changed so much:-( hugs Jan xx
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