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In the heat of the Mohave desert
Drumming echoes build
In unison to my heart
Pumping and pounding

Faraway chants introduced
In some unknown native tongue
Rhythmic and nostalgic
They draw ever closer
As I close my eyes
Inviting my soul to manifest
Freeing it into tall billowing swirls
In the largest of overhead circles
So ethereal and surreal

That bold drumming resonates
Picking up the beat
Heavier and intense
Pumping and pounding
Pounding and pumping
Pumping and pounding
Pulsating fiercely through me
Transporting me to the other realm
Meshing with the paranormal
Mesmerized and entranced
Awakening old secrets trapped
In parallel dimensions

One second
The sudden silence
Plonks me like a lifeless puppet
Free falling to fathomless depths
The next
My body goes into convulsions
Quivering and shaking
An obscure dam bursting with torrential tears
From I know not where

A baffling source of unspeakable grief
Inconsolable anguish
Throwing me into utter bewilderment
Imagining how I may have been transported
By some mystical sorcery induced by
That powerful drumming and warrior chant
Awakening the deep painful haunting despair
Of a throbbing wound
Unhealed through multiple lifetimes

What could I have possibly endured
If not the broken heart
Of a grieving wife and mother
Suffering the unbearable loss
Simultaneous of both
Warrior husband and warrior son



AP: 2nd place 2021

Read on air by invitation  ~  February 19, 2021  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

Submitted for contest EMOTIONAL ANGER, HURT, RAGE sponsored by LEWIS RAYNES - November 26, 2017  -  RANKED 3RD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/18/2021 6:08:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. You are a very talented writer. And I am sure that you were once a Native American. Without a doubt. This is one to be very proud of. Beyond words, just as you know what I’m talking about. Spirit is beyond words.
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Date: 6/18/2021 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your touching comment, White Wolf ~
Date: 6/18/2021 2:41:00 AM
Thank you, White Wolf. I'm sure I was aboriginal in a previous life. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/summoning_the_spirits_966501
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Date: 6/18/2021 6:09:00 AM
How did you get here before me? Lol
Date: 12/15/2017 11:08:00 PM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Line - keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:15:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/3/2017 3:43:00 PM
oh my goodness. Such sorrow, Line, I can see why this scored so well. The ending really got me! Congrats on the winner list.
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Date: 12/3/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 12/1/2017 7:12:00 AM
I. Love the outburst of emotion in this write, congrats on your win
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Brian. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/30/2017 8:20:00 PM
I love the pumping and pounding thumps in this poem, a great write, congratulations on your win Line.
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Date: 11/30/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/27/2017 5:52:00 PM
Wow! A deep and compelling write Line. Intriguing and powerful imagery.. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your much appreciated visit.
Date: 11/27/2017 7:38:00 AM
Well written, Line--best for a win!
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay. I'm glad it resonates with you.
Date: 11/27/2017 4:38:00 AM
Wow! some heavy duty opioids lol...kidding aside a great write my friend...best of luck...^WW^
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:42:00 AM
Not even. Thank you, ^WW^
Date: 11/26/2017 11:40:00 PM
Profound is the word to describe this skillfully written poem. GL in the contest, Line.
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal. Very appreciated.

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