Summertime Celebration-Freedom!

Summertime Celebration-Freedom!
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

I love summertime.
Especially the ones—
Meandering from here
To where with only 
   One care.
Adventure

Three curious children and a map
Destined for experience.
The trunk packed to the rim:
Ravioli, tuna, applesauce, and veggies, 
Salty crackers, peanut butter, jelly
And you name it…snacks galore.
Lots of pillows, covers and 
Camping gear--

We were ready to:
     Go or stop…
     Snack or eat…
At a picnic table,
In a park, or anywhere,
Even in the car.
Together as one:
   Driving,
   Looking
   Learning.
Family votes --

Hey, I’ll bet that’s why-
They were:  Good. Helpful
  …and Curious
They were liberated 
     For the summer!!!  
No structure- only:
Fun. Joy. Surprises.
Oh, the togetherness…smiling.

We were Free—

Free to drive all the way to New York,
Park for 30 minutes, wave at the Statue of Liberty,
And drive a thousand miles back home. 
Free to stand on the Continental Divide one day
And camp in the Grand Tetons the next.
Free to explore Yellowstone National Park
…Or ride on a carriage in San Francisco.
Free to dig for fossils in Aurora, North Carolina
Or see: the Painted Desert and The Petrified Forrest.

We were Free—Free—Free—to Celebrate Summer…. and we did!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Docherty Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 12:22 PM
A lovely write. Back to basics for parents would be good, so many think entertaining the kids such a tremendous and expensive task to take on board, and yet all it takes is a little creativity and getting back to nature. above all they just want you to joinin and have fun sharing the time together... Liberating stress from all with any luck! Lovely write again Dane Ann, hugs, Anna-Marie.
Bono Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 11:36 AM
What a wonderful journey in this one.I will read more poems later.
Kendrick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Sounds like my kind of fun. Keep writing. Sara
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October 18, 2009 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured! ~Trudy~
Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Dane Ann >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Beautiful memories indeed! Truly enjoyed. Congrats on your featured poem this week! Love Light Truth Patty
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October 12, 2009 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 3:27 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dane Ann. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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October 12, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Dane.Rgds Brian
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October 11, 2009 at 6:50 PM
Absolutely beautiful and refreshing, Dane! What a great piece of writing...nothing better than summer vacations like that! - Tim
Docherty Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 7:24 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner in Johns contest, a lovely written piece...kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Winter Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Warmest congrats Dane on your most excellent win in John's contest! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 12:42 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest Dane. Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 6:17 PM
Great job, Dane Ann ...congratulations !!
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Can I go too???!! Sounds like so much fun!! Great memories, I'm sure!! :)
Winter Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Wow. Yes, those summer adventures (especially yours here) are total freedom! What joy to not have any timetable or routine to adhere to. A wonderful, freeing write making me look forward to summer! Love, Shar
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April 13, 2009 at 12:36 PM
It sounds like your family had some wonderful adventures! When I was a child, my father took me to all of the places you mentioned above. This poem brings back incredible memories! Thank you for taking me back in time to lighter, happier days of youth. Love, Carolyn
Christian Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:29 PM
aww how wonderful, if this poem is in the summer competition I hope it wins its so great, makes the reader feel kind of sunny and warm, God bless from diane
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