Summer's Soliloquies

Sun's flames burn through hazy, midday heat
Raising fierce winds -- dusty, choking ...
Fiery orb descending toward horizon's lair
  ~ Ghostly white moon rises, painted on low-ceilinged sky

Bare, brown patches spread, invading once-proud green mantles
Parched blades wither, yielding to ceaseless daily inroads
Of blighted blotches, rank weeds, strangling lush herbage
  ~ Signs of fading Summer's sad soliloquies  

Flowers vanish, decapitated stick figures
Barren, beheaded stalks, twisting, turning
On their ghastly way, headless horsemen of the day
  ~ Sere petals grinning, decked out in obsolescence

Moist green leaves prematurely crinkle brown
Unmoored from twig or branch, breeze by
Face up, now capricious, flip over, nurse Earth's bosom
  ~ Signs of fading Summer's sad soliloquies

Crickets' symphonies screech endlessly
Fireflies lanterns flicker on-off, on-off, on-off
Abrupt descent of Humidity's airless curtain
  ~  Summer soliloquies' soundless denouement

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Date: 8/5/2018 8:31:00 AM
Congrats on your win inBrian's contest-- you paint the scene so well, dense with imagery, and a great closing line--a poem as a painting, not an easy thing to pull off.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2018 8:37:00 PM
L.J., your comment has really blown me away. Did I really do all that?! Your kind words are encouraging and much appreciated! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/3/2018 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Such beautiful poetic imagery. Awesome descriptive flashes in time. Well done!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2018 8:36:00 PM
Appreciate your generous praise, Susan! Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/2/2018 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2018 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Subimal. And once again, congrats to you on your win as well! Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/2/2018 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of Summer's awesome gifts, Gershon. Congratulations on your Podium win! Sandra
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and encouragement, Sandra. And congrats again to you too for your win. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/2/2018 4:21:00 PM
Hello Gershon. Mind blowing imagery is depicted in this magnificent poem. Congrats on your win.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2018 4:24:00 PM
Samuel, I appreciate you're checking this one out. Many, many thanks! ~ Gershon
Date: 8/2/2018 11:25:00 AM
Just swinging back to extend BIG Congratulations, on your superb win! Hugs. Pandita
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thank YOU again so much, Pandita. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/2/2018 9:17:00 AM
Wow - awesome imagery, Gershon. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. ... And congrats to you on your win as well! ~ Gershon
Date: 8/1/2018 11:10:00 PM
Makes me think of the wildfires in CA now, there is a big one not far from me, great descriptions!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thanks, Michelle---although I'd like to put the 'douser' on that wildfire. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/1/2018 9:42:00 PM
Had to come back when I knew what to say. Exquisite. xomo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2018 10:41:00 PM
You get the comeback of the year award!! :) gw
Date: 8/1/2018 4:48:00 PM
Gershon, you blew me away with the most vivid imagery painted in this very lovely piece! Your Muse was animated, going all-out, to sparkle in this captivating Summer soliloquy! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece! What a treat! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2018 10:42:00 PM
Why, thank you, Pandita! Your comments have blown me away. Appreciate the encouragement! ~ Gershon
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