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Man in hammock, Drawing, Lying on top of the hammock man free png ...

Oh each summer one sport ever calls Though my energy always just stalls For I'm not but a menace Playing hot, sweaty tennis Just knocking the fuzz off old balls ... So, how slothful can one hot guy be In a hammock beneath a palm tree Where all summer, I'll swing Paying some goose to bring The fresh ice for my Long Island Tea. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Summer Laziness" Limerick Contest, Mohan Chutani, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/24/2020 6:52:00 PM
what great fun and BIG congrats on that win!!
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:46:00 PM
Great to see this funny summer limerick win a top place. You are great at limericks too. Congratulations Greg :)
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:54:00 PM
Hello sir, Beautiful write ,a crazy Limerick:-) Congratulations for your top win Sir:-) Keep writing.Take care. Warm regards~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/19/2020 8:20:00 AM
An honour to share the podium with you Gregory. Must say I struggle in the heat and I'd be the one ringing the bell for more ice. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Date: 6/19/2020 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Iced tea is a great idea under the palm trees! Leave those old balls alone! Good fun!
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Date: 6/18/2020 11:46:00 PM
Greg, fun to see you putting on your limerick hat every once in a while. Another doozy, congrats on your #1!
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Date: 6/18/2020 11:30:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Gregory.
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Date: 6/18/2020 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations! Funny!
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Date: 6/18/2020 7:48:00 PM
Gregory, the bard, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Knocking the fuzz off old balls was so cleverly done. Best. Mohan
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Date: 6/18/2020 5:18:00 PM
Says he with a "wry (rye) smile "knocking fuzz off of old balls." So fun to let the mischievous muse go a little wild! Enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest. I think I'm headed for the hammock now!
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Date: 6/18/2020 9:19:00 AM
I enjoyed this. I have a hammock too. Nice one :)
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