Summer's Farewell

She dropped me from her burnished arms
upon a dusty prairie road
and cry I did, and pulling at her skirts
heavy with mud from a morning rain
that fell upon a dying earth..
I begged her to stay for just a while longer
and looked for yellow sunflowers 
to help me make her stay, I found I was alone
as the sunflowers wore blackened robes
and shriveled heads that could not speak
and crumbled in my hands..
Turning towards a dying sun, she stole away
with eyes she laid upon the shadowed hills
and fields where flaxen heads had caught
the breeze of golden summer's breath..
With one slow turn she raised her hand
as if to wipe away the liquid rain that
ran on my face - as in a mirror I saw
her reflection, as her tears became mine..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 30, 2013 at 12:08 PM
lovely win........SKAT
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October 30, 2013 at 5:10 PM
thank you
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October 29, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Hi Valerie... congratulations on your win...luv ~ LINDA
Bellefleur Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 4:56 PM
thanks linda... I do not know what I have won.. lol have not been on here forawhile...
Johnson Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 6:17 PM
An interesting submission. I can see us all pulling at Mother Summer's skirts. Very nice. Love, Joyce
Bellefleur Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 4:56 PM
thanks joyce... did I win a contest have not been on here for awhile and did not get a notification.
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest again Valerie. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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August 4, 2011 at 7:51 PM
Thank you very much Carol. I have not written poetry for so long, and have to try and get back into the mode..
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Valerie. Love Carol
Austin Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Like this one, Val. Love the tearful farewell, the dying sunflowers symbol. Love, daver
Bellefleur Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Thank you very much for your comment.
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February 21, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Congrats Valerie on this well deserved feature. June will soon be here and her arrival will be a welcome sight. Vince
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Valerie. Love, Carol
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February 20, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Congrats Valeria on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv...
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 5:08 AM
What a Magnificent write Valerie. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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August 4, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Carol. You are welcome.
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