Summer's End


The breeze has stirred the trees with tender strains
of promises.  Refrains we could not keep.
But left behind, a fervent song remains,
in fields of grass, where summer goes to sleep.

Our silhouettes, once sketched beneath the sky,
of fingers, gently placed upon my breast,
are only dreams I've kept.  And now I sigh
from memories the years have laid to rest

The seasons do recall.  Who could forget
the blush of gold upon the summer's cheek?
Those days are gone, without regret, but yet
each dawn brings back the youth we long to seek

When summer's gone, and we, as well must go, 
we'll rest our hearts in leaves of afterglow
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For Francine's Contest: Summer's End -- 8/25/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ligon Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Beautiful, Carrie! The layout is very fitting to the topic. Congrats!
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October 30, 2013 at 12:05 PM
wow.. awesome win.... SKAT
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October 29, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your Summer's End Win...Pd
Johnson Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Beautiful and very descriptive. Ccongratulations Carrie. right up there where it belongs. Love, Joyce
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Your poem is beautifully crafted with succinct rhythm and comely flow.
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Ahhh!! The poetic quality of this one is wonderful..It has great rhythm, rhyme and flow..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
Phillips Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:03 PM
I like this poem. Beautiful description and good choice of words.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:17 PM
You described it quite beautifully leaving out any negative feelings of losing summer! Great entry for the contest.
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:11 AM
- Carrie, thank you for your beautiful poem ..... Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 2:02 AM
this is so beautiful, makes summer's end all the more welcoming when poetry about it is as good as this...
Mehta Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:28 AM
Who would not like to be in such a lap of nature? Summers's refuge has a good scent if one has choice for... Carrie
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