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Summer's Curtain

The curtain of summer approaches now It is knitted in the green of the trees Flowers are saying goodbye with a wow! Petals will fall and fly afar with breeze Vibrant color will decorate the land It is knitted in the green of the trees Sea will bring coolness to the beach’s sand Wildlife will gather food, they are smart Vibrant color will decorate the land Strawberries now gone, for an apple tart Nourishing food comforts us, as we know Wildlife will gather food, they are smart The curtain can come down for the new show We’re grateful and ready to watch it all Nourishing food comforts us, as we know We leave humidity to wear our shawl The curtain of summer approaches now We’re grateful and ready to watch it all Flowers are saying goodbye with a wow! Heidi Sands 8/28/21

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Holly Bohto

Date: 9/7/2021 8:33:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this..esp the title.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/7/2021 9:05:00 AM

Hi. I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for the kind comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/29/2021 5:27:00 PM

Beautiful write Heidi, I enjoyed the read

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 7:46:00 PM

Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/29/2021 7:34:00 AM

This is such a beautiful seasonal portrait and with your chosen poetic form, you have captured so many wonderful images! I think this is one of your very best Heidi, Happy Sunday!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 12:45:00 PM

That is such a nice thing to say, Mike. Thank you very much. I hope you are well. Happy Sunday!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2021 3:14:00 AM

I like this one. I don't think I remember this form and will need to look it up. From what I read here it is a challenging one to do but you handled it well. Thanks for your visit to my page. We are finally getting better. It will be 3 weeks on Tuesday that we have know we have COVID. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I am happy to hear you are getting better. I didn't know you were going through that. Prayers! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/28/2021 11:20:00 PM

Certainly different, Love this curtain fall, onto the next curtain call, one knitted with threads of colour.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 5:17:00 AM

Thank you very much Harry. I hope all is well :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/28/2021 8:28:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Beautifully knitted poem. Details of nature's days ahead: We need rain, while others receive too much. Fires still burning and hurricanes turning. I'm still grateful for a life lived under Summer's Curtain. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2021 8:54:00 PM

Thank you Richard. I hope you get some rain. Please be safe with fires , etc. I appreciate your comment. Goodnight :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/28/2021 5:52:00 PM

Lovely poem and wonderfully written, I love it, this into my fave.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2021 5:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Lasaad. I appreciate your kind comment and the Fave. ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2021 2:36:00 PM

WOW! This is beautifully executed in a delightful form, Heidi. Enjoyed the voice of your poem. Into my FAVES. A poem of the day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thank you so very much Vijay! I appreciate your support always. I hope you have a nice evening :)