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I lived my best in season of the sun, those yellow, mellow days when cares are flung to June’s warm breeze, and childhood is begun, a field to wander in, and all is young! I lived my zenith in the summer heat. Ah, zephyr of sublime and untried heights! Blue sky, July, and taste of kisses sweet still haunt my mind in cool midsummer nights. In August came dry winds, and I was torn from my adobe of early gleeful days. My children both at summer’s end were born, and now a grandchild in new sunlight plays. When dusk, unhurried, comes, I live my best. In Virgo’s sun may I be laid to rest. For Brian Strand's ANY 2012 POEM any theme/ any form max of 18 lines Poetry Contest and now for PD's Any Form Under 15 Lines Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/31/2020 10:39:00 PM
I thought I recognized this, and sure enough, it's in your Seasonal-Go-Round chapbook. In fact, when I set the book down, I noticed that stanza 1 is the quote on the back cover! So either it's a favorite of yours or of Marie's? Well, mine too. It smells like watermelon and sunscreen and playing tag barefoot on the grass. Quick check: did you mean to write 'abode' in line 10? A fave for me, my friend ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 11/1/2020 9:04:00 PM
I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that if nobody's mentioned it in the last 8 years then I bet nobody's even noticed it in all that time, haha! Don't sweat it to much.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2020 7:24:00 AM
oh, crap, is it that way in my chapbook too?? That is sure a mistake I should not have missed!!
Date: 8/14/2013 3:19:00 AM
Good morning, Summer's Child...At first glance, I thought the first verse was a monorhyme but now I see it is not!...VERY cool my friend...The last verse really knocked me out too...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 8/13/2013 9:31:00 AM
congrats on a great win andrea. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:07:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love [ yup a 10..lol minus 9!]
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Date: 8/11/2013 4:31:00 PM
Andrea, I am always swept away by the elegant flow and quality lines of your work. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 2:42:00 PM
Andrea, a nice one....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/11/2013 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Andy xx
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:40:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea.....
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Date: 8/11/2013 6:30:00 AM
Good morning Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS''' Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda
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Date: 10/26/2012 4:24:00 PM
your sonnets are usually very nice ....and this one is no exception.......hugs....
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2012 Poem" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win with your summer beauty! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:54:00 PM
Your sonnets are always so good to read Andrea....congrats on another big win in the contest.
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:55:00 PM
Andrea~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem in Brian's contest ~always*Pd
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:54:00 PM
I am a summer's child too, Andrea...as I get older tho I am enjoying Autumn more...Great ryhming..is there anything that u can't write about? Anything at all?....I am still in awe of the Dr. Jekyll entry..You will carry that one away with the grand prize trophy..
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Date: 2/22/2012 6:12:00 PM
I am also Summer's child. Very nice win, Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:29:00 PM
xcongrats Andrea on another lovely win for this elegant poetry so sweet and penned so nicely luv.. soup mail..
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Date: 2/22/2012 3:46:00 PM
Big Congratulations on your win Andrea, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/1/2012 4:31:00 PM
Dear Andrea, So sorry to learn of your husband's poor health. However, what the Christian's don't like about Obama's health care plan is that he's made provision for more and more abortions. Anyway, don't take my poem/lyrics too seriously - I'm commenting from Australia -I'm not in the USA. I don't have health insurance either. It's too expensive here as is most other things including housing. We don't get any tax deduction for mortgage payments. Love, Maureen
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:08:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, for yet another kind comment. I enjoyed your Summer's Child. I have 4 grandchildren of my own from 6-16 yrs but they live in another state so I don't see much of them. I just wish I got to enjoy my own children and didn't have to work to support them. They are both married now. God bless, Maureen xx
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Date: 1/29/2012 11:40:00 PM
a very touching and warm write, all the best in the contest,,and Thank You for reading and commenting on mine,,and I am doing just fine and from the sound of this so are you,,,Blessings...Cecil
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Date: 1/27/2012 9:13:00 PM
That's a beautiful story poem with a romantic touch..I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:10:00 AM
Lovely lovely, Andrea, are you telling us a little about yourself here. top Sonnet again from you, i really do enjoy these. harry
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Date: 1/24/2012 1:06:00 AM
aaww, summer child! yes, i can 'see' that you are indeed. warm, kind and brings sunlight everywhere you go. wonderful poem Andrea, good luck on the contest.
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:06:00 PM
This is beautiful, Andrea
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