Summer's Bedtime Story

Summer's Bedtime Story

The grande finale
a beautiful painted sky
rich and deep the hues
tucked in by the cool night air
saying "good-night" to the world.

Contest:  Tanka You
Sponsored by:  Francine Roberts
 Jenny Emelander  7/11/11


Placed No. 3 in Francine Robert's " Tanka You" contest-7/16/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Beautiful Tanka, Jenny. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your win Jenny in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol
Eastman Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 10:18 PM
Beautifully written.
Emelander Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Thanks everyone!-Thank-you to Francine for the No. 3 placing in your contest!
Mehta Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 5:42 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, jenny
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Congrats on your win...Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Congrats Jenny on your fantastic win with this bedtime story of summer luv..
Roberts Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 9:10 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Jenny
Sumler Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Wow this an amazing write loaded with beautiful imagery and creative overtones of expression! Excellent piece here Jenny and a sweet title!
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