Summer-Colored

So many memories I have are summer-colored, like those walking-down-the-lane days recalled in various hues of green. Green for Grandpa’s cornfields spread all around us and green for the grass on which my sisters and I used to run and play.

     Besides that color green, which prettily surrounded me through all my childhood,
I think a favorite memory would be the colors of one lovely day spent with my family, the family created by my spouse and me and a day our kids were young.

    We lived near San Francisco. Few troubles plagued us then and I loved our short time in California! One summer day at last we went to see the beach of Santa Cruz.
I don’t remember details of everything we did. We walked along the boardwalk, naturally. I’m sure the kids, both pre-teens, enjoyed the rides. Even I was every bit as excited as the two of them. I’m sure my spouse and I took pictures, ate good-tasting food and watched our children doing things all children love to do.

    But what stood out for me was our time spent on the beach and how we all jumped up to greet each wave that tumbled toward us time and time again to knock us down. What pure pleasure in the splashes of blue that fun-filled day, the blue of the Pacific, which chilled me at the start until I warmed to it as the yellow sun in blue of sky above smiled down on us.

    Yes, the blue of sky and water and the constant shining yellow of the sun:
those would be the colors of my favorite summer memory -when times were good and we were young and simply having fun.

new colors emerge in the autumn of one's life soon is winter's dirge as blue asters wave in fields bye-bye to sweet summer time For the Haibun Free-Style Contest of scott thirtyseven
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Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on your winning work..!!!Sara
Gentry Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Congrats on placing in the Haibun free-style contest!
Tor Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 7:23 AM
Great win Andrea and loved this write. Congratulations!
A   Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 7:19 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
Cheema Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Congrats Andrea! Felt like going on a holiday to the beach as well as running through the cornfields!
Scars Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Perfect! Congrats Andrea:) *smiles*
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:07 AM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your Haibun Free-Styled win. WUV **SKAT**
May Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Summer memories are often colored in fun...Congrats on your win Andrea
Dutta Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Congrats Andrea to win. Love. Anisha D
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:57 AM
There are times that I wish I still lived on the Pacific rim, but alas not for now. Thanks for writing such a wonderful example of my fledgling form, and for taking me back to those summer days in New Zealand. Though your wonderful colour metaphor has me reading this poem in sepia. Congrats on the 4th placing.
Inman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Wonderful prose and powerful ending Tanka.
Yvonne Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Wow, totally awesome the last piece of the style is jaw dropping, just brilliant writing. A Fav!
La France Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Andrea, that was a beautiful walk down memory lane with you, I liked so much the part about the waves and the sky, well I liked the whole poem actually, l love it 7
Laurie Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Hello Andreas... good memories tend to match with the warmest and brightest colours. Thank you for the trip down your memory lane Andrea - Lindsay
Bayles Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 6:15 PM
It's amazing how memories live on and on. Vivid narrative and nice poem. Mike Bayles
Pinet Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Happiness is most often found wrapped in nature's splendid coat of appealing colors and sounds. Emile.
Vaso Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Beautiful trip down memory lane, wonderful poem! I have to go and unpack my snow shovel now grrrrrrrrrrr
Ryerson Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:32 AM
Ah, the memories of times gone by...Once again you have shown your unique versatility when it comes to writing different forms...I'm rating this a 7 and you a perfect 10. Merry Christmas my friend! - Tim
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November 30, 2015 at 4:32 PM
WoW! Andrea, this is so amazing. So you spent time in the beautiful state of California. I guess I should appreciate it more. I concur with the one below this reads like a winner to me. Best of luck in the contest. It's a for sure 7 and a fav:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Reads like a winner.. way to go..I am sure Scott will like it.Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Andie, love the colorful memories you shared with us.. =`) The free verse is nice... love the way you use the bye-bye its cute.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
Gentry Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Enjoyed your memories and was even reminded of my own... happy times in the waves... I like the color coding of your memories. Am not familiar with Haibun or free verse much either. You do have a way of making it so alive and personal. Good luck in the contest!
Delaney Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Love your colors of summer descriptions. Good Luck in the Free style Haibun. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:21 PM
I enjoyed this little romp down memory lane Andrea. I don't think I knew you ever lived in California. I hope this does great in the contest!
A   Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 9:23 PM
you have a beautiful way with colors, Andrea, no wonder this poem is a winner to be and you know it. Congratulations now and later. Keep up the awesomeness. Always & Forever LINDA
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