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Summer Wind

The summer wind took us both by surprise capturing my smile as my dress blew in the breeze with such a floral ease my heart panted as we walked upon the shore laughing forevermore tomorrow may never come after all holding on to this presence embrace hush while exploring this warm evening rush catering to the fondness of sweet yesterdays gathering soft petals alongside the rivers edge meeting you again here atlast the past decended right into the ocean causing giant waves crashing against the mountain side the earth shook beneath our feet tiny bubbles gathering between our toes splasing our nose leaving white sand colorful pebbles behind why we'd promised to be right here while in this very moment when time stood still I'd say yes darling I will taking me in your arms oh honey I do why the absolute best part of me is loving you while the brilliant sun kisses the skies you continue wiping tears from my eyes caressing me with all your might hold on tight never let go desire completness found this blanket of purity ultimate surety untimliness comforted within our sultutriness our wondrous life dance of simple pleasures for they shall always be our priceless treasures

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Date: 4/12/2024 12:09:00 PM
Hello Yolanda, You created a romantic poem. I sensed the passion as I read it. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./
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Date: 3/31/2024 10:22:00 AM
Every line a further rung toward the ultimate goal. Very nice written Yolanda! :)
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you very much many blessings to you.
Date: 3/31/2024 10:13:00 AM
Priceless treasures found in memories, Wonderful write, Blessings
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you for you kindness be blessed.
Date: 3/31/2024 6:46:00 AM
I very much enjoyed the flow of this piece. I found it very soothing to read.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you I am well pleased many blessings.
Date: 3/31/2024 6:19:00 AM
Much enjoyed the uplifting, joyful voice of your poem, Yolanda. Wonderful images you convey throughout.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for you compassion many blessings.
Date: 3/31/2024 2:29:00 AM
How heartfelt and beautiful is this, i love the way you’ve painted imagery throughout this and how captivating your lines are so gorgeous and so well crafted , especially the ending and how youv described the sun kissing the skies etc is soulful. Pleasure reading this
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/31/2024 4:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness many blessings.

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