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Summer Wind

The summer wind took 
us both by surprise capturing 
my smile as my dress blew in 
the breeze with such a floral 
ease my heart panted as we 

walked upon the shore laughing 
forevermore tomorrow may never come 
after all holding on to this presence 
embrace hush while exploring this warm 

evening rush catering to the 
fondness of sweet yesterdays 
gathering soft petals alongside
the rivers edge meeting you 
again here atlast the past 

decended right into the ocean 
causing giant waves crashing 
against the mountain side the 
earth shook beneath our feet 
tiny bubbles gathering between 

our toes splasing our nose leaving 
white sand colorful pebbles behind 
why we'd promised to be right here
while in this very moment when time 
stood still I'd say yes darling I will taking 

me in your arms oh honey I do why 
the absolute best part of me is loving you 
while the brilliant sun kisses the skies
you continue wiping tears from my eyes 
caressing me with all your might hold 

on tight never let go desire completness 
found this blanket of purity ultimate surety 
untimliness comforted within our sultutriness
our wondrous life dance of simple pleasures 
for they shall always be our priceless treasures

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/12/2024 12:09:00 PM
Hello Yolanda, You created a romantic poem. I sensed the passion as I read it. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./
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Date: 3/31/2024 10:22:00 AM
Every line a further rung toward the ultimate goal. Very nice written Yolanda! :)
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you very much many blessings to you.
Date: 3/31/2024 10:13:00 AM
Priceless treasures found in memories, Wonderful write, Blessings
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you for you kindness be blessed.
Date: 3/31/2024 6:46:00 AM
I very much enjoyed the flow of this piece. I found it very soothing to read.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you I am well pleased many blessings.
Date: 3/31/2024 6:19:00 AM
Much enjoyed the uplifting, joyful voice of your poem, Yolanda. Wonderful images you convey throughout.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/1/2024 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for you compassion many blessings.
Date: 3/31/2024 2:29:00 AM
How heartfelt and beautiful is this, i love the way you’ve painted imagery throughout this and how captivating your lines are so gorgeous and so well crafted , especially the ending and how youv described the sun kissing the skies etc is soulful. Pleasure reading this
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/31/2024 4:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness many blessings.

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