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Summer Weds Winter

SUMMER WEDS WINTER

icy angels fall
they coat white the earthly grounds
lovers rest up-close
thawing the cold-blooded air
summer heat weds winter chill

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Visual #7
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest Name: Get Romantic 
Placed 6th

O.E.Guillermo
8:17 pm, March 04, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Casarah Nance Date: 3/11/2015 5:49:00 PM Wonderful! Grats on your win ;) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/12/2015 8:07:00 AM thanks much Cassie. :)!

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/9/2015 1:32:00 PM Congrats on this great win!! Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:42:00 AM thanks much Sara... :)!

Skat A Date: 3/8/2015 6:14:00 PM Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:40:00 AM Skat, thanks much! :D!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2015 11:59:00 AM Hello Olive, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:39:00 AM weeeeee.. ! thanks much LOlly Linda.. :D!!! hugs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/7/2015 8:00:00 PM Wow...wonderful, romantic imagery, Olive! I love how you wed the winter's chill with their "summery" heat. Congrats and well done! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:38:00 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :)! weeee I saw yours too and i love the first line.. :)! Shield of stars eh.. :D!

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2015 3:03:00 PM beautifully romantic imagery Olive I love your take on the picture many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:36:00 AM thanks much JAn.. :) COnrats too I see you are on the winner's list.. :D!

Paul Callus Date: 3/7/2015 2:55:00 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!! Pleased to have you by my side on the winners' list:) Beautiful Tanka...lovely imagery...striking final line. Top marks! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:35:00 AM thanks much PAul.. :) hugs and hugs!.. :D!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 6:17:00 AM mahal na ito tanka>Congrats eloi>Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:34:00 AM thanks much Rajat.. :)! so appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Kp Nunez Date: 3/7/2015 12:59:00 AM Congrats Olive! Hugs and smiles...:D Kim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 12:33:00 AM Hugs and smile KIm.. :) thanks.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2015 12:03:00 AM Olive, the idea of this tanka is just wonderful. My only advice would be to use an S on Wed. Summer "weds" winter. The entire poem is in the present tense, and I was wanting to see the ending line be the same way. I really like what you were saying. congrats. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/7/2015 4:57:00 AM thANKS Andrea for the placement... :)

Kamran Rashid Date: 3/4/2015 3:55:00 PM A WARMTH OF LOVE...OCEAN OF GOODNESS#lovd reading this...as its oll human to feel cold and hot..but to get words isn''t really in evry ones part# Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/7/2015 4:56:00 AM thanks much for stopping by... :) God bless us all..

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/4/2015 2:19:00 PM vivid imagery, eloi... hope you got my soupie.. paki send naman ang cell mo.. miss ya!.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/6/2015 6:54:00 AM weeee I got your soupie Nette.. :) I'll message you one of this days.. :) I'll be there in Manila next week for some errands that I need to do.. :) thanks much for stopping by... :)!

James Fraser Date: 3/4/2015 1:38:00 PM The Summer of the East weds the Winter of the West. Love the take on Visual 7 Oliz, good luck in the contest, hugs, Dino ;-) xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/6/2015 6:53:00 AM thanks much James.. :)! weeeeeeeeeee!

Emile Pinet Date: 3/4/2015 9:51:00 AM A poetic look at a moment in time as one encompasses the grandeur of nature and our place within it. Emile. #7 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/6/2015 3:59:00 AM thanks Emile.. :) I appreciate you dropping by my humble poems.. :)!

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/4/2015 9:06:00 AM Interesting work for the contest ..Way to go ..A snow blanket isn't a good place to play is it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/4/2015 3:46:00 PM thanks much to Sara.. :) I appreciate your visits too.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2015 7:05:00 AM - A lovely visual, Olive - Good luck in contest !- hugs Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/4/2015 3:44:00 PM thanks anne Lise.. :) i am always pleased to read your comment..

Janet Eaton Date: 3/4/2015 6:40:00 AM Enjoyed this, great imagery. Hugs Janet Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/4/2015 7:42:00 AM thanks much JAnet.. :)! hugs too!