Summer Time

In summer time, I'll roast some hot dogs:
and the marshmallows that I desire
with the funnest of friends I admire
by the flames of a cozy warm fire
as the simple but best times transpire.

(for Brian Strand's rhyme time list contest)
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Mcclain Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Hi Andrea, Delightful poem--what fun imagery, and just in time (six years later) for the warm weather. Here's wishing you an uber-belated congratulations on your contest win. Cheers, Brian
Gulley Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Congrats on being featured. Summer, sounds wonderful. Sharon : ) Wonderful write.
Austin Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:34 PM
You said it, Andrea. After this Michigan winter I've worked up real desire for those hot dogs and cozy warm fires. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:38 PM
strange how Soup is featuring this inconspicuous little poem from long ago, which did not even win in the contest!
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Wow, yet another form I've yet to try! LOL. Yes, I love sonnets : )
Poet Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Nice one (this form is new to me).Enjoyed-kashinath
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 2:57 PM
This reminds me of summertime quite a bit and I am ready for it, too. Great write, fits well in the contest.
Mason Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Very well done here, Andrea ... good luck in the contest and thank you so much for your recent comments!!
Winter Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 5:13 AM
Ooops, sorry. Meant to say this list poem sounds awesome and brings back fun memories. Sure sounds inviting in the midst of winter!!! Nice work! xoxo
Winter Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 5:11 AM
You clever girl you keep pulling me here with your thoughtful comments. About Breakdown, no it actually was an ekphrasis which is a poem about a piece of art. It was Jackson Pollock's Orange Head for a Brian Strand contest. It could be used for many who suffer at times being on the edge, depression, etc. I am not here for good reasons, a long emotional process of moving, plus I just became a grandmother (wow-that was a real surprise-but a blessing) so, just busy in life. Thanks again! xoxoxo
Hilliker Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Very clever list poem. I haven't tried one of these yet. Best of luck in the contest.
Knop Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Love your ABC, a well written entry! Mouth watering it is especially now when it is cold outside. Thank you for commenting Early snow!...Gert
K. Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:27 AM
Am I invited??? Hehe I'm gate-crashing nonetheless--haha. I love roasted marshmallows, and make it by the seashore too! Ok, I'm getting carried away but I guess it only means that I really enjoyed your poem :) enjoyed my time reading your lovely rhyme ;) btw--about the calendars--there are actually websites where you can customize calendars and have them printed per piece ;) will email you about it...
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Andrea. Wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Oh YES! Wonderful look-ahead. Right now I'm feezing my _____off here in Meeshigan! Love, daver
Strand Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 12:15 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrea.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 12:05 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
Dufresne Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 6:58 PM
Cool and hopeful of warmer times to boot! nice list for the contest. good fortune to you, Andrea!-Robert
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 6:24 PM
Good luck with this great list poem. I am glad you liked Wild Life. I just posted The Balckberry and The Rose, which I wrote first and then decided I should tell the other perspective from the Blackberry's viewpoint. Joyce
Esquire Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Dear Andrea, Excellent list poetry Good luck in the Contest and Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG - Soup Mail Call
Freeman Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Oh yes the fun times of summers gone by, may we recapture some more this year. Per your comment: We have this one life, it's a very long one, forever,what we like in spirituality's growth in the now can be continued, in the new earth. Many can't see that, but it is true. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Sounds like one for the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Thanks for the kind comments on my work.Sara
Haick Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 10:21 AM
A sure winner, Andrea! I wish you good luck in Brian's "Rhyme Time Contest". Good job here! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poems, dear! Truly appreciated! Peace and love, your friend, Audrey
Sheart Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Andrea, I really like this one! It will make a wonderful entry in Brian's contest.Love your rhyme...In the summer time, makes me feel warmer somehow here in the snow. Beat of luck! Love Light Patty
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