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Summer Tides

a waning sun nods
rippling tides gently erase
melted sand castles

6/27/2021

Summer Haiku Poetry Contest
Tania Kitchin - sponsor

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Sam Kauffman

July 5, 2021 at 9:35 AM

Wonderful story of sandcastles built on the shore returning to the sea only to be be built again. Congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 4, 2021 at 12:12 PM

- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

July 3, 2021 at 8:09 PM

John, this is a great haiku! It presents a vivid moment. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Tania Kitchin

July 3, 2021 at 1:23 PM

John, congratulations on your winning placement, love the sandcastle imagery!

Brian Sambourne

July 3, 2021 at 11:36 AM

Hello John, Congratulations on a delightful summer Haiku! I especially like the shore imagery as the tide creeps in. Best wishes, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2021 at 10:10 AM

I am really loving this winner list. Yours is a well deserved win. Congrats

Christuraj Alex

July 3, 2021 at 9:55 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 3, 2021 at 6:51 AM

I think I need a day on the beach playing in the sand. Maybe a year. Then maybe I will melt away with my castle… Enjoyed this tremendously, congratulations for your win! xomo