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June morning promising, bright Hours full of silky light Framed by ominous smokey gray foresight Until the warning rumble of rain Brings the cloud's revenge on sun's domain The tumbling water's weight gathers vice Layering grass in diamond-cut ice Our season's roses, crystallized Under dazzling sheen of glacier guise With summer thunder, harmonized.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/14/2018 6:43:00 PM
How visually stunning Michelle. Beautiful!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/15/2018 4:47:00 PM
thank you for your kind words, FJ!
Date: 7/8/2018 6:55:00 PM
Nice imagery, Michelle. Lovely.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/10/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thanks, this was inspired by an actual thunderstorm that happened a while ago out in my neck of the woods-
Date: 6/12/2018 9:58:00 AM
Such a nicely crafted write about how summer storms awaken, arise, and rumble through...This sure describes the process in Chicago, yet in such a unique, poetic way. ~ Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/24/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, always appreciate your unique comments!
Date: 6/10/2018 3:38:00 PM
Well done!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/24/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, John!
Date: 6/10/2018 7:41:00 AM
- Refreshing after thunder, Michelle - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/24/2018 5:45:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it, thank you-
Date: 6/10/2018 6:36:00 AM
Very nice Michelle :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/24/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 6/9/2018 7:34:00 PM
A sweet read, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/24/2018 5:46:00 PM
Appreciate that, thank you-

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