Summer Sweet You

Shooting in the Heaven's a fireworks in this sky
To love you deeply in this world in which you gave me
You're a hot exploding star even the moon smiles on you
wishing magical dusting thoughts the soul left my body

A fairy queen dream she who smiles in sunshine rays
gently soft warm sweet sweeping emotions touch me
looking across faraway hills sparkling inner vision
falling on a star shining out blue white radiant love

Pure burning warm hot bright dazzling my eyes with deep beauty
Who shot me down in a blaze of glory I kiss the earth 
salted sea falling golden spiraling cupid's arrow 
strikes sweetest chords deeply in the heart when our two souls met

In paradise I am lost in sweet surrender 
within a summer warm dream floating sent lingering
Hawthorn bushes drifting aroma honey beautiful 
summer dream hotly melting desires holding each other

Embracing you I remember thinking thank you
most precious jewels pouring for you out of a sun 
setting teapot pours out awaiting Christmas making plans
you have made my year so golden I am in debt to love


I wrote this just posted it.  back in July i read this to someone very special it starts out in 12 syllables 13/14/14 they rise for a reason inside emotions draw
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Chircop Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 7:35 AM
This is dreamy Liam.So romantic this is..Charma
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:48 PM
what a wonderful love poem, LIam. sorry it took me so long to get here and see it. what a busy week I had!!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:55 AM
no worries andrea always great to see you pal thank you deeply for the wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 1:56 PM
You've painted here such a beautiful poem of a true love and summer romance,Liam my dear friend.I am so sad for you that your love and plans didn't go the way you wanted them to. What woman would be such a fool not to think that your love is more than enough.Whoever is, she's a real fool, not loving such a wonderful man like you Liam. One day I really pray you find all the love and happiness that you deserve.Remember, God knows what's best and works in mysterious ways.A 7 for me! Love and hugs! :) xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 5:07 PM
sometimes we get judged on all the wrong reasons outside of love draws another face wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt appreciated bless you made me smile
Bateman Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 1:17 PM
Liam, Exceptional write here Mate!! Your words and verses carry with them ever-enveloping magic, mysticism, and a most undeniable and wonderful sense of enchantment!! A most absolute "7" here Mate!! The Leprechaun Chorus will be singing in unison for days about this fine write!! Cheers Mate and Spill Ink!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 3:02 PM
oh i was enchanted for sure as they say blind in love wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt oh the leprechaun is away with the fairies ha ha pal bless you
Manassian Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:43 AM
What a beautiful piece, Liam. How beautiful. How sweet. No one can steal memories....I hope yours keep you happy. Love will find a way...
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 10:36 AM
thats for sure eileen they show me the face of beauty such memories live forever wonderful comment dear pal thank you kindly bless you dear pal
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:30 AM
- A really sweet and romantic summer Liam - Hope all your days be full of love - A beautiful poem, providing the reader to yearn for a summer romance :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:50 AM
yeah it was anne lise a beautiful summer romance that stands out a memory of love alone in a dream thought wonderful comment dear friend bless you have a great day
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:09 AM
so so beautifully penned liam such images of love and devotion my friend - you sure are a lucky man to have found someone so so special:-) Hugs jan xx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:43 AM
not so lucky just a beautiful special memory jan my love was not enough in the end wonderful comment dear friend bless you
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