Summer Surcease

She stood, peacefully on the pier. The sun, over the hill, just rising. In her thoughts, just wondering . As she wiped away, a lone tear. High school was in a few weeks! Ambivalence filled her young soul! As a chilly breeze made her cold. Would her classmates be nice or freaks? She promised God to do her very best. The fish in the lake, mulled about in aquatic beauty, yet made nary a sound. Looked up at her swimming in circles round, The girl, mesmerized, by the gentle waves, knew she was up to all of life's tests!  7/14/2021  ~1~

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Date: 7/14/2021 10:19:00 PM
Panagiota, Tie it and untie it again, I wish the knots would come undone in a summer with or withot all the tests. -Richard
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/14/2021 10:59:00 PM
You said it Richard. Glory Days, I was so tanned and lovely ! Ah, the glory of youth! Those green,Green Days! Hugs, PANAGIOTA Panagiota,
Date: 7/14/2021 5:03:00 PM
A wonderful scene depicted in beautifully flowing verse, Pangie! My kind of poetry - Bob H
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/14/2021 5:29:00 PM
Bob! A lovely comment. How nice' Pangie XXOO
Date: 7/14/2021 4:53:00 PM
What a lovely contemplative poem in a peaceful setting. Madelyn McKay
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/14/2021 5:02:00 PM
Madelyn, such powerful adjectives! Wowie I do thank you. Maybe other poetess's here had it all together, or the Poets too? I wonder Pangie xxoo
Date: 7/14/2021 2:14:00 PM
When you look back you wondered why those things were so challenging and as you get older you take those challenges in your stride. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/14/2021 5:13:00 PM
I guess I take nothing in stride. My life has been exciting, CHock Full Of happiness but many rough and windy roads also I am a fighter not a follower! Will never toe the lind or bend at tbe knee for approval )) PangiexxXU. I love individualists Like the Poer .,,Rusftie, Me? Never follows a crowd. Pangie XXOO I avoid them
Date: 7/14/2021 1:50:00 PM
I can still remember how nervous I was before starting high school, I guess any big change can bring doubts; I also like the feeling of gaining confidence and courage to face life's test head on!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/14/2021 5:27:00 PM
Hi Michelle. I found tons to overcome all my life. Gee,,, Starting HS scared me. Went to an All girls SchOol. Did not do well in Home Ec,))? Big changes are good for us! Have to stretch. Thank you Pangie XXOO
Date: 7/14/2021 11:50:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I hope she passes these Life tests. Hugs xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2021 10:29:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, you are welcome my friend. Hugs xx Darlene
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/14/2021 5:16:00 PM
Sge dud ,,m Beyond expectations. Thanks Darleve Pangie xxoo
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