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Summer Sunset Yawns

. Summer sunset yawns Stretching its arms across lawn Paints the sky unique Sleepily birds seek their homes Whip-Poor-Will sings loves pure song Contest:Tanka You Theme: Summer Nights Sponsor: Francine Roberts Date written: July 11, 2011

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/19/2011 4:53:00 PM

congrats on the 4th place win mom!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/19/2011 4:02:00 PM

beautiful! congratulations on your win!

Shani Fassbender

Date: 7/19/2011 2:31:00 PM

Super Sweet Sara! Love it!

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 11:16:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Sara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

Jenny Emelander

Date: 7/17/2011 6:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win!-Jenny

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 5:44:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/17/2011 3:07:00 PM

such a charming image!!! and introducing the bird song was great Congrad's Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/17/2011 7:00:00 AM

sara...well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 9:31:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your fantastic win with this dynamic delight my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2011 9:13:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/13/2011 10:39:00 AM

I really enjoyed this one, Sara! Could almost picture this in my mind, especially your second line :D wish you the best in the contest :D

Cory Long

Date: 7/13/2011 5:55:00 AM

this was awesome good luck in the contest with this gem. cory

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/12/2011 6:57:00 PM

very pretty. an excellent entry. good luck in the contest :)

Judy Ball

Date: 7/12/2011 4:01:00 PM

Very nicely done Saera. Paints a beautiful ful picture of a Summer eve. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2011 2:45:00 PM

Beautiful tanka, Sara. I could really imagine being there. What or whom is Whip-Poor-Will, please?

Daver Austin

Date: 7/12/2011 1:15:00 PM

Yes! This would make a good song. Kind of 1930s variety. Love, daver

David Williams

Date: 7/12/2011 4:59:00 AM

hi Sara. thanks for your comments, love this one good luck. can i access your blog???. if so how???? David

David Williams

Date: 7/12/2011 12:47:00 AM

hi Sara, i would like to enter your contest, but what is a "low country boil"? sorry. David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2011 11:54:00 PM

YOu did really well here, Sara. I really love this one. The first two lines rock!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 9:20:00 PM

i love the dainty yet rich touch of this glorious piece, sara... winning material for me.. yes! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 8:29:00 PM

lovely words compliment the theme so beautifully Sara.. feeling those birds and songs ..good luck in the contest my friend..

Jenny Emelander

Date: 7/11/2011 5:59:00 PM

Great write! Good luck in the contest!: thanks for the nice comment!:)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/11/2011 5:40:00 PM

This is excellent Sara!Best wishes.