Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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July 4, 2023 ~ Take a chance on a chanso contest

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Summer Sunrise: Chanso

Summer morning sunrise
Dawn paints with pastel hues
Day breaks before my eyes

Pastel hues gently brushed
by angels in the sky
when all the world is hushed

The sky has golden threads
stitching closed nimbus clouds
with rain nature imbeds

Nimbus clouds of dark grays
Soon earth's thirst will be quenched
Then light from gold sun rays

Quenched, budded flowers bloom
on honeysuckle vines
softly scented perfume

Vines climb the garden wall
after a summer squall

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Linda Alice Fowler July 15, 2023 at 10:05 AM Beautiful imagery in this win Lin. Congratulations! :)

Kim Rodrigues July 11, 2023 at 6:49 PM The breaking of day, you’ve done justice, with your title, lovely imagery and scent! Congratulations, Lin!

Victor Buhagiar July 4, 2023 at 6:38 AM Sunset, rain giving power and climbers embellish the scene, I'll be always in awe of your poems. Lin Lane July 4, 2023 at 6:40 AM Hi Victor. I'm so pleased to read your generous reviews. Thank you so much.

John Oldham July 4, 2023 at 6:22 AM Thumbs up on this Chanso poem, Lin! Paints a perfect picture, especially this "rainy season" in New England! Best, John Lin Lane July 4, 2023 at 6:35 AM Hello John and thank you. I've never written a Chanso, maybe I still haven't. lol Send some of those showers down south!

Deb M July 4, 2023 at 4:54 AM Booti-ful Lin!! Picture is perfect for the poem! Debx Soupmail!! Lin Lane July 4, 2023 at 5:28 AM Good evening for you, Deb and thank you on both counts. Have a good night.