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Summer Sunburn

This summer has been much hotter than most
About the tan I got, I dare not boast
My body is quite a sight
Because my back side is white
But from the front view, I look like burnt toast

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2024 1:49:00 PM Good one, Lin this happened to me a few times iny younger days. One time so bad that big water blisters formed on my red chest and I got the chills. It was so crazy. Anyway big congrats here. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/18/2024 1:47:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the laugh. Yep, burnt toast from the front with a white back side. That is summer for most. Have a fun day writing away................... Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/18/2024 6:29:00 AM Lin, congratulations on your first place win your cute and funny limerick. Login to Reply

David Kavanagh Date: 8/7/2024 8:31:00 AM Well it beats having a red backside and unable to sit for a week lol! quite a cheeky fun Limerick Lin, good luck in the contest, cheers David Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 9:17:00 AM No kidding! We’ll see how it does in the contest. It was just fun to write. Thanks a bunch.

Jan Allison Date: 8/7/2024 7:29:00 AM omg Lin this is absolutely hilarious as is the pic lol:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 9:16:00 AM Your approval is good enough for me. Thanks ,Chick.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 8/7/2024 7:17:00 AM Dear Lin, loved your limerick and yes we have all been there. I hope you do well in the contest. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 9:15:00 AM Hello Daniel and thanks for liking this one. I’m giving contests a try again.

Mike Gentile Date: 8/7/2024 6:14:00 AM Lin, love your entry! It is quite humorous to environ that white backside, most of us have had one at one time or another! Good luck in the contest xxoo Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 9:14:00 AM Hi Mike. Thank you. PS has lost some of its glitter and appeal so I’m hoping entering contests might make it more appealing again.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/7/2024 5:40:00 AM Good one, Lin! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 5:43:00 AM Thanks so much, Kim.

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/7/2024 5:35:00 AM Lol, been like that a few times over the years, now I cover up and wear a hat. Welcome back and good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 12:01:00 PM ha Spice is nice as long as it's not too peppery. Wouldn't want my 'mean girl' rep to be more evident. Jan Allison Date: 8/7/2024 7:30:00 AM yipee Lin that is fabulous news, soup has been pretty rancid of late, hope you add some spice xx Lin Lane Date: 8/7/2024 5:43:00 AM Thanks, Tom. The Soup has lost its appeal lately, so I'm going to enter contests again, hoping it will renew my interest in the site. Sunburns are ouchies!