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Tania Kitchin's Funny Summer Limerick Contest ~ August 7, 2024

This summer has been much hotter than most About the tan I got, I dare not boast My body is quite a sight Because my back side is white But from the front view, I look like burnt toast

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 1:49:00 PM

Good one, Lin this happened to me a few times iny younger days. One time so bad that big water blisters formed on my red chest and I got the chills. It was so crazy. Anyway big congrats here.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the laugh. Yep, burnt toast from the front with a white back side. That is summer for most. Have a fun day writing away...................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 6:29:00 AM

Lin, congratulations on your first place win your cute and funny limerick.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/7/2024 8:31:00 AM

Well it beats having a red backside and unable to sit for a week lol! quite a cheeky fun Limerick Lin, good luck in the contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 9:17:00 AM

No kidding! We’ll see how it does in the contest. It was just fun to write. Thanks a bunch.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2024 7:29:00 AM

omg Lin this is absolutely hilarious as is the pic lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 9:16:00 AM

Your approval is good enough for me. Thanks ,Chick.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/7/2024 7:17:00 AM

Dear Lin, loved your limerick and yes we have all been there. I hope you do well in the contest. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 9:15:00 AM

Hello Daniel and thanks for liking this one. I’m giving contests a try again.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/7/2024 6:14:00 AM

Lin, love your entry! It is quite humorous to environ that white backside, most of us have had one at one time or another! Good luck in the contest xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 9:14:00 AM

Hi Mike. Thank you. PS has lost some of its glitter and appeal so I’m hoping entering contests might make it more appealing again.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2024 5:40:00 AM

Good one, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 5:43:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/7/2024 5:35:00 AM

Lol, been like that a few times over the years, now I cover up and wear a hat. Welcome back and good luck in the contest. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 12:01:00 PM

ha Spice is nice as long as it's not too peppery. Wouldn't want my 'mean girl' rep to be more evident.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2024 7:30:00 AM

yipee Lin that is fabulous news, soup has been pretty rancid of late, hope you add some spice xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 5:43:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. The Soup has lost its appeal lately, so I'm going to enter contests again, hoping it will renew my interest in the site. Sunburns are ouchies!