Summer Sun - Form Swap Quatrain

Sun is shining, all is well
Lovely summer they foretell
Found winter clothes so restraining
All is well, sun is shining.

Fields of rapeseed, like molten gold
Enjoyed by children freedom untold
Run in the shade amongst the sheaths
Like molten gold, fields of rapeseeds

Let's have a picnic, we're hungry 
So much running will get sticky
Dressed in shorts looking oh so chic
We're hungry,  let's have a picnic

Pies and sandwiches, lemonade too
Will be too full to run and jump, so
will rest my head, so full with such riches
Lemonade, pies and sandwiches.




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21 March 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sivey Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 9:35 PM
This is the epitome of summer, such a glorious description of this wonderful season! Many people look forward to the summer, and you have brought the feeling of this season perfectly into light my friend! I really enjoyed reading this superior poem this evening! What a grandiose write, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:44 PM
Thanks Russell ....Seren
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