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Summer Storm

Thunder and lightning Electricity unleash In my beating heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/12/2016 11:42:00 AM
Jaimie Burrell, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:06:00 PM
JAIMIE, Great piece to read, before I head out. Well done ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:01:00 PM
Just wanted to add Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/25/2009 11:24:00 PM
Is this about the weather or love? Ahhh, I know it doesn't matter...it is nature either way. LOL Great writing. A beautiful Haiku, very well done. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/25/2009 4:44:00 PM
Sounds like love to me. Enjoyed this one. The title compliments the poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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