Summer Speeds By

Old brown leaves from last fall, spread down the wooded hillside
Soon to be covered with new colorful leaves this year
I passed a tree already turning a bright color of red
I suppose it won’t be long now, before the rest follow
The blanket of green fern are standing tall beneath the pines
The sun fleets in and out of the large passing clouds
Some gray ones lurk above, wanting to bring more rain
But, the ground is already wet, soaked from earlier times
That flattened leaves, and turned the colors in the trees
                        --- As summer speeds by ---

Heidi Sands

8/20/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sivey Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 4:35 AM
Yes, go summer go....away! I don't care much for summer, too HOT! But your poem I do care for, I think it's wonderful! I really enjoyed the calm and peaceful feeling you expressed within your tender poem here my friend! What a fantastic piece, full of life breathing in for Autumn...Love it!! Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Autumn will be here soon for you Russell. Your comments brighten my morning. Thank you :)
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 4:35 PM
The conscious mind extends itself beyond our norms and we enter a world composed of reality defused with imagination, where nature is often tentative and so precious as to awe us with its beauty and scare us with its fragility. Well written. Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment Emile! :)
May Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Summer soon will give way to the colors of autumn...Nicely penned Heidi
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 3:54 PM
Yes it will Joseph. Then we will have brilliant colors :) Thank you. !
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:09 PM
You paint a picture of a summer about to depart--good work, Heidi!
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Thank you. It isn't quite here to passing yet, but just starting! :)
Warrior Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:56 PM
As summer speeds by...your verse will last forever...nicely written Hiedi...^WW^
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much WW!! :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:38 PM
summer left a month ago here, and we are experiencing monsoon rains...lovely poem with a fine ending, heidi..huggs
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Wow nette! Be careful with those rains. We have had a lot of rain spring and summer and torrential the other day. Thanks for the comment on this :)
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