Summer Song Premiere Contest Winner

an aviary

at far end of the garden -

daybreak sonata


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A Transition of Seasons Haiku Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
Placed 1st
Posted 9th September 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/27/2020 5:02:00 PM
Birds a plenty ;)
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/28/2020 3:43:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Angela. Regards // paul
Date: 9/5/2020 4:30:00 AM
Many congrat's on this magnificent Haiku, Paul.
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 5:34:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine. Have a lovely weekend. Regards // paul
Date: 5/21/2020 6:29:00 PM
Hello Paul Callus, a beautiful song of the summer. Regards Darlene
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Darlene; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Date: 5/11/2020 10:49:00 AM
The trophy logo made me click ... and I wasn't disappointed. One bird is a little tune, but a flock is a symphony!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2020 3:56:00 PM
Exactly, Timothy...you nailed it straight away! Thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 11/23/2019 7:23:00 PM
I see this has a trophy on it. How wonderful!
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/24/2019 6:03:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea; that happens to be my 2nd trophy, and if you look closely inside it you will notice many n/as :) Regards // paul
Date: 11/19/2019 9:58:00 AM
Being new to this site , I do feel very happy seeing your poems . It has do much beauty and depth. It's pure joy reading them ... Lots of inspiration as well. Thanks sincerely ...
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/24/2019 6:01:00 AM
Thank you for your sincere complimentary feedback, JV; truly appreciated. Regards // paul
Date: 11/19/2019 4:14:00 AM
Great..
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/24/2019 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Ferdous. Pleased to meet you. Regards // paul
Date: 10/21/2019 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful! A well deserved first place :-) x
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/22/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine. Have a nice day:) Regards // paul
Date: 10/5/2019 9:00:00 PM
A fascinating write my dear friend, Paul. Belated Congratulations for a Well-deserved Gold Win! Sorry, I seldom visit 'cuz I stopped writing poetry for quite a while. Hope I can write again soon. Hugs.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Leonora; such a pleasure to have you stopping by. I hope that your muse will start pestering you again:) Hugs // paul
Date: 10/5/2019 2:45:00 PM
How beautiful, Paul..... KUDOs to you Panagiota
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2019 4:45:00 PM
So pleased that you enjoyed it, Panagiota...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 9/24/2019 11:51:00 AM
I can see why this was 1st - it's beautiful
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/25/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Have a nice day. Regards // paul
Date: 9/21/2019 6:11:00 PM
Very pretty, Paul! Congratulations!
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2019 4:08:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! Have a nice day ~ paul
Date: 9/21/2019 9:31:00 AM
Absolutely amazing haiku, Paul. So happy to see your taking the top prize! Hugs, Carolyn
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2019 4:00:00 AM
You are too generous, Carolyn...but I can assure you that I love your comments :) Hugs // Paul
Date: 9/21/2019 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations Paul: Wonderful image deserving of the gold cup. Best, SuZ
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2019 3:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Suzanne. Lovely to see you back and being active again. Warm regards // paul
Date: 9/21/2019 7:52:00 AM
Back with congrats Paul--a trophy win so well deserved!
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2019 3:46:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. Best regards // paul
Date: 9/20/2019 5:43:00 AM
Paul, this is beautiful, congratulations on your deserving first place trophy win !
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/20/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. Trophies are not easy to come by :) Regards // paul
Date: 9/15/2019 6:31:00 PM
thanks, Paul, for what you said about my ku.
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2019 2:01:00 PM
I meant every word I said :) Regards // paul
Date: 9/15/2019 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations Paul on your awesome win - your poems always have poise, magic, inspirational talent and sheer delight! What more beautiful than a sonata at daybreak from your aviary at the far end of your garden. Kudos Paul, Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenny. You are kind and generous :) your support and encouragement are truly appreciated, ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Date: 9/14/2019 11:13:00 PM
A lovely Haiku my friend. Love it. A well deserved win. Congrats. God Bless, JB
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/15/2019 1:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Judy. Have a lovely day. Blessings // paul
Date: 9/12/2019 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Paul :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/13/2019 4:46:00 PM
Many thanks, Heidi.Goodnight :) // paul
Date: 9/11/2019 10:27:00 PM
Yay!!! I am so happy to see this wonderful haiku win the Trophy! Congratulations my friend. It is totally deserving of the honor! xxoo
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/13/2019 4:46:00 PM
You are too kind, Connie! Thank you on all counts, and for a return visit. Warm regards // paul
Date: 9/11/2019 4:04:00 PM
Really terrific Paul....congratulations!
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/13/2019 4:42:00 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it, David; thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 9/11/2019 12:47:00 PM
Hi Paul, This is just beautiful! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2019 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. I just checked out Wed 11th Oct on my diary...and it was a lovely sunny day, so went out and about enjoying life ;) Best regards // paul
Date: 9/11/2019 9:54:00 AM
Lovely done! Bird lover that I is, loves this! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo!
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2019 4:34:00 AM
So pleased you enjoyed it, Maureen :) Thank you. Warm regards // paul
Date: 9/11/2019 8:36:00 AM
Lovely, Paul. Congrats on the TOP spot.
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/13/2019 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Your winning entry merited a higher placement!! Regards // paul
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