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Summer Song

an aviary

at far end of the garden -

daybreak sonata


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A Transition of Seasons Haiku Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
Placed 1st
Posted 9th September 2019

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Angela Crabtree

November 27, 2020 at 5:02 PM

Birds a plenty ;)

Paul Callus

November 28, 2020 at 3:43 AM

Thank you for the visit, Angela. Regards // paul

Elaine George

September 5, 2020 at 4:30 AM

Many congrat's on this magnificent Haiku, Paul.

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 5:34 AM

Thank you, Elaine. Have a lovely weekend. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 21, 2020 at 6:29 PM

Hello Paul Callus, a beautiful song of the summer. Regards Darlene

Paul Callus

May 23, 2020 at 6:51 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Darlene; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

May 11, 2020 at 10:49 AM

The trophy logo made me click ... and I wasn't disappointed. One bird is a little tune, but a flock is a symphony!

Paul Callus

May 11, 2020 at 3:56 PM

Exactly, Timothy...you nailed it straight away! Thank you. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2019 at 7:23 PM

I see this has a trophy on it. How wonderful!

Paul Callus

November 24, 2019 at 6:03 AM

Thank you, Andrea; that happens to be my 2nd trophy, and if you look closely inside it you will notice many n/as :) Regards // paul

Johnson Vdev

November 19, 2019 at 9:58 AM

Being new to this site , I do feel very happy seeing your poems . It has do much beauty and depth. It's pure joy reading them ... Lots of inspiration as well. Thanks sincerely ...

Paul Callus

November 24, 2019 at 6:01 AM

Thank you for your sincere complimentary feedback, JV; truly appreciated. Regards // paul

Ferdous Mahmud

November 19, 2019 at 4:14 AM

Great..

Paul Callus

November 24, 2019 at 6:00 AM

Thank you, Ferdous. Pleased to meet you. Regards // paul

Elaine Perrin

October 21, 2019 at 9:05 AM

Beautiful! A well deserved first place :-) x

Paul Callus

October 22, 2019 at 9:09 AM

Thank you so much, Elaine. Have a nice day:) Regards // paul

Len Gasun

October 5, 2019 at 9:00 PM

A fascinating write my dear friend, Paul. Belated Congratulations for a Well-deserved Gold Win! Sorry, I seldom visit 'cuz I stopped writing poetry for quite a while. Hope I can write again soon. Hugs.

Paul Callus

October 7, 2019 at 4:47 PM

Thank you, Leonora; such a pleasure to have you stopping by. I hope that your muse will start pestering you again:) Hugs // paul

Panagiota Romios

October 5, 2019 at 2:45 PM

How beautiful, Paul..... KUDOs to you Panagiota

Paul Callus

October 7, 2019 at 4:45 PM

So pleased that you enjoyed it, Panagiota...thank you! Regards // paul

Jack Horne

September 24, 2019 at 11:51 AM

I can see why this was 1st - it's beautiful

Paul Callus

September 25, 2019 at 7:26 AM

Thank you, my friend. Have a nice day. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2019 at 6:11 PM

Very pretty, Paul! Congratulations!

Paul Callus

September 22, 2019 at 4:08 AM

Thank you, Kim! Have a nice day ~ paul

Carolyn Devonshire

September 21, 2019 at 9:31 AM

Absolutely amazing haiku, Paul. So happy to see your taking the top prize! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus

September 22, 2019 at 4:00 AM

You are too generous, Carolyn...but I can assure you that I love your comments :) Hugs // Paul

Suzanne Delaney

September 21, 2019 at 7:58 AM

Congratulations Paul: Wonderful image deserving of the gold cup. Best, SuZ

Paul Callus

September 22, 2019 at 3:49 AM

Thank you so much, Suzanne. Lovely to see you back and being active again. Warm regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

September 21, 2019 at 7:52 AM

Back with congrats Paul--a trophy win so well deserved!

Paul Callus

September 22, 2019 at 3:46 AM

Thank you, Vijay. Best regards // paul

Constance La France

September 20, 2019 at 5:43 AM

Paul, this is beautiful, congratulations on your deserving first place trophy win !

Paul Callus

September 20, 2019 at 8:07 AM

Thank you, Constance. Trophies are not easy to come by :) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2019 at 6:31 PM

thanks, Paul, for what you said about my ku.

Paul Callus

September 16, 2019 at 2:01 PM

I meant every word I said :) Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

September 15, 2019 at 10:22 AM

Congratulations Paul on your awesome win - your poems always have poise, magic, inspirational talent and sheer delight! What more beautiful than a sonata at daybreak from your aviary at the far end of your garden. Kudos Paul, Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

September 16, 2019 at 2:48 PM

Thank you very much, Jenny. You are kind and generous :) your support and encouragement are truly appreciated, ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Judy Ball

September 14, 2019 at 11:13 PM

A lovely Haiku my friend. Love it. A well deserved win. Congrats. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

September 15, 2019 at 1:21 AM

Thank you so much, Judy. Have a lovely day. Blessings // paul

Heidi Sands

September 12, 2019 at 8:33 PM

Congratulations for your top win Paul :)

Paul Callus

September 13, 2019 at 4:46 PM

Many thanks, Heidi.Goodnight :) // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

September 11, 2019 at 10:27 PM

Yay!!! I am so happy to see this wonderful haiku win the Trophy! Congratulations my friend. It is totally deserving of the honor! xxoo

Paul Callus

September 13, 2019 at 4:46 PM

You are too kind, Connie! Thank you on all counts, and for a return visit. Warm regards // paul

David Mohn

September 11, 2019 at 4:04 PM

Really terrific Paul....congratulations!

Paul Callus

September 13, 2019 at 4:42 PM

So pleased you enjoyed it, David; thank you. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

September 11, 2019 at 12:47 PM

Hi Paul, This is just beautiful! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

September 22, 2019 at 4:41 AM

Thank you, Alexis. I just checked out Wed 11th Oct on my diary...and it was a lovely sunny day, so went out and about enjoying life ;) Best regards // paul