Beautiful Scars Poet Quatrain

Summer Simplicity

Short Forms For Summer Part III
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Summer Simplicity

The east rises glory and it gently sweeps my face,
   the fields of yellow caress my eyes with simplicity.
      Strawberries and watermelon juicy as a candy-pops,
         I hear the June bugs titter-tatter and I drown in felicity.

Date Written: May 22, 2016

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Jan Allison May 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM such lovely imagery LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus May 28, 2016 at 6:35 AM Give me the simple things in life and make me a happy man! This poem has the ability to make me so! Congrats on this fine win, Laura:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong May 27, 2016 at 9:34 PM Your poem sings summer Loolu. Congratulations on your win! ; )

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2016 at 9:15 PM I truly loved this one. The imagery is delightful. I only put it a bit lower because of the uneven syllable count. BIG congrats in my contest.

Karam Misra May 27, 2016 at 11:56 AM Simplicity simply brought out. Congrats, Laura. ~karam~

Lukas Ficklin May 27, 2016 at 10:24 AM Congrats Laura.. I really like this one.. seems so mellow and care free :)

Funom Makama May 23, 2016 at 1:14 PM Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.

Barbara Gorelick May 22, 2016 at 5:30 PM Very pretty...such a mellow feel to it. BG