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Summer Sight

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Summer Sight Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron crack of dawn whispers willows soaring in the wind surges of the sun fields of sheer romance eastern equinox blossoms summers scent lingers grassland for my love sweet kisses for the billow emerald beauty Date Written: May 17, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2016 7:55:00 PM

wow, I had not seen these. They are really pretty!! and I enjoyed your voice. So professional sounding.

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/18/2016 3:17:00 PM

Luloo, congratulations on your nice placement in 'Summer Sight' Premiere Contest! Beautiful Haikus. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo
Date: 5/18/2016 6:18:00 PM

thank you Sandra! :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 5/18/2016 2:01:00 PM

A breathtaking Haiku, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Lu Loo
Date: 5/18/2016 6:18:00 PM

many thanks Eve! :)-luloo

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/18/2016 7:51:00 AM

Excellent. All are lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading it. All the best for the contest.

Lu Loo
Date: 5/18/2016 6:19:00 PM

thank you Ravi :)-luloo

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/18/2016 5:13:00 AM

Congrats Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 5/18/2016 6:15:00 PM

thank you Rob :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 5/17/2016 8:32:00 PM

Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest

Lu Loo
Date: 5/17/2016 8:35:00 PM

thank you Nayda, glad you enjoyed it :)-luloo

Tim Smith

Date: 5/17/2016 3:03:00 PM

Wow amazing haiku Luloo...you should submit these to haiku journal or three line poetry....the second one will be accepted for sure....Charmaine turned me on to there. She, Jan, me, and a few others from here are published there.

Lu Loo
Date: 5/17/2016 7:39:00 PM

Thank you Tim:)-luloo

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2016 6:02:00 PM

Charmaine Chircop

Lu Loo
Date: 5/17/2016 5:01:00 PM

wow, thank you Tim:) Charmaine who? I apologize I'm so bad with names hehe :) many thanks again :)-luloo