Summer Rispetto

A ballerina butterfly, she’s gliding
sweetly through the meadow’s grass still fresh with dew.
She sees a stream, kicks off her shoes, and sliding
down from a rock, she steps into smooth, cool blue.
A swing on a nearby tree she later spies.
Higher and higher, up to the sky she flies!
Flowers surround her; the sun shines on her face.
My small summer princess rules the day with grace.

Aug. 2, 2018 for Barry Stebbings' "Picture Me A Summer Rispetto" Contest
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Milgate Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Really sweet little poem. Nice to read. thank you.
Rutherford Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Beautiful picture painted with this poem.
Godwin Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Stunning, the picture your words paint is beautiful and creates a carefree mood in me. Oh, to be a ballerina butterfly! Love ... CayCay
Raghunathan Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 4:51 AM
lovely!
Wade Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:27 AM
Well done on win, this is a beautiful piece of work. Faux
Gentry Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 4:00 PM
This is adorable, Andrea. Such a sweet gold medal winner. Bravo.
Salehi Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:28 PM
So beautiful...
Hamilton Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:11 AM
So nice Andrea, double congrats are in order I see, worthy of all the accolades!!
Carber Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Congrsts Andrea-- lovely, lovely!
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Once more with feeling, Andrea: As sweet and innocent a poem as has appeared on the Soup for as long as I can remember! And, oh, that 'smooth, cool blue!' How did I not make it a FAVE the first time around? … It is now! Best wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Always on top of your game! A lovely write! Congrats, Andrea!
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Congrats on your #1 win and POTD! I am taken with the line, "...she steps into smooth, cool blue." Wonderful! Best wishes, Gershon
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win and your POTD! Lovely!
Roper Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:37 AM
Andrea,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Horne Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 10:12 AM
this is lovely - so pleased to see it was POTD. Must try this form
May Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Dropping back with my congrats
Haight Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Hi, Andrea, congratulations on your awesome poem being honored as Poem Of The Day, and also for your First Place win in the contest! Well done! Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Double congratulations Andrea, for your well deserved first place win and your excellent POTD honors with your poem of vibrant imagery and emotion. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Congratulations on your great FIRST Place Andrea. This lovely poem I see, also was honored with POTD! Big Congrats for both honors my friend! : )
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations on POTD & st place win in the contest Hugs Eve
Bateman Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Hello Andrea, Congratulations on POTD!! A very beautiful Rispetto indeed!! Best Wishes, Gary
Sietesantos Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 2:27 PM
I knew it - swinging back with BIG congratulations, Andie! So very well deserved! Hugs. Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 11:52 AM
how could this get anything other than a top spot in the contest and POTD too! Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
B. Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Andrea!! Absolutely well deserved.. Incredibly breathless and beautiful!! Many Blessings..
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