Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Summer Reveries - More Than Dreams

Each day is time for new thanksgiving. 
Lengthen life, enhance your living. 
Vigor renews, or so it seems, 
When reveries are more than dreams. 

Joy is simple and often cheap: 
Leap in fields, then picnic and sleep; 
Chase fireflies and dance with moonbeams- 
Summer reveries more than dreams. 

Cuddle at drive-ins, go to a beach. 
Enjoy the taste of a sweet summer peach. 
Go cruising with friends or wading in streams. 
Make your reveries more than dreams. 

Each day is time for new thanksgiving- 
Sweet summer reveries more than dreams.

(This rhyme is a type of sonnet called kyrielle sonnet
 for my favorite season of the year!
For the Seasonal Bliss Poetry Contest of Regina Riddle)

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Sandra Haight August 24, 2014 at 11:20 AM I loved your poem, Andrea. The simple pleasures of yesterdays that make lasting homes in our thoughts. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Jack Horne August 24, 2014 at 10:59 AM what a lovely write, Andrea - full of joie de vivre. So sorry I missed your footle contest

Maurice Yvonne August 24, 2014 at 8:54 AM beautiful. congratulation on your win.

Monterey Sirak August 24, 2014 at 7:07 AM One of life's simple joys is reading your poetry, Andrea. This one is full of snap shots of good times. I watched fireflies the other night but I didn't chase them.

Joyce Johnson August 23, 2014 at 2:28 PM You really know how to make the most of your summer. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Faye Gibson August 23, 2014 at 12:54 PM Good to see you sitting here on top, Andrea; I already told you how much I like this poem. I like the thanksgiving theme that is so strong in it, too.

Daver Austin August 23, 2014 at 12:43 PM Beautiful. My reveries now are on autumn. Tell me the weather will be mild. Now for a taste of that "sweet summer peach." Love, daver

Archana Garg August 23, 2014 at 10:44 AM "Joy is simple and often cheap"-- how true. Most of the time we don't enjoy what we buy, but enjoy the things of nature. Congratulations on your gr...eat win.

Casarah Nance August 23, 2014 at 8:55 AM Wonderful, nature is free to enjoy, everyone should take advantage of it. The leaves are starting to change color up here already, but that's michigan for ya. we didn't have much of a summer :( hope yours was a beautiful as your poem. :) hugs my friend xx

Paul Callus August 23, 2014 at 8:33 AM Congrats on your top winning spot, Andrea....another beautiful poem with a lovely message. Beauty and joy can be found in simple things; we only have to look around us to realize how much there is to enjoy. // paul

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2014 at 6:26 AM Prodigious..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2014 at 6:20 AM - Andrea, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - I love summer :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta August 22, 2014 at 11:11 PM In India, summer is so hot, we generally wait for summer to go. I know it's not case with countries in the world, Congrats on the win. Andrea

Faye Gibson August 22, 2014 at 4:48 PM "Joy is simple and often cheap" is a beautiful line that gives a great truth about life. So many look for happiness in the BIG things and it is hidden in the simple and small. Best wishes with this lovely sonnet.

Jan Allison August 22, 2014 at 10:44 AM I cant say anything that hasn't already been said! it's a 7 from me I LOVE it:-) Hugs jan xxx

Matthew Anish August 22, 2014 at 10:20 AM Have not been to a drive -in in years! Summer is fading fast - very fast. Sweet words here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire August 22, 2014 at 6:18 AM Well said, Andrea. Especially like the line "Make your reveries more than dreams." You have brought summer to life and I wish you well in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Eileen Manassian August 22, 2014 at 1:16 AM Hello, my sweet. I'm with Freddie on this one. Beautiful in every way...When reveries are more than dreams...life becomes wonderful. Hugs to you from my bedroom where the AC and fan are running simultaneously! ;)

Tim Smith August 21, 2014 at 11:56 PM Wow...can I join you for some summer fun...there are no more drive-ins here anymore... I miss those days