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Contest: Heat of the heartbeat, sponsored by Ink Empress, Written 6/20/26. Pic by Cute summer love photography

Summer Rendezvous

It was the summer before my last year of college
My ex dumped me a week before finals
It’s going to be a long boring summer, maybe I’ll be surprised
I will try to make it a time of self-care and reflection

I was invited to a party at my friend’s summer cottage
A beautiful place, where the sky drifts into the sea
A Victorian mansion on the beach with a crashing surf
It will be fun with lots of friends and new people to meet

I packed my bags and ventured out for my day trip
I decided to stop to get some wine coolers and chips
At the store I bumped into someone at the cooler
I embarrassedly turned to apologize as he caught my breath

He was beautiful with bronzed muscular arms and blond hair
His eyes were sparkling blue, and his smile was invitingly warm
I was thinking that I could get lost in the mist of your eyes
He smelled like a mixture of fresh summer rain and woodsy spice

I finally made it to the summer cottage, the party had already started
I relaxed with some friends over drinks and hors d’oeuvres 
Then I saw him, the man from the store, he saw me and smiled
My stomach started to flutter and as I knew I wanted him

He came to me and gave me a hug, and we laughed about the store
We talked and laughed for hours until we started to kiss
My head felt intoxicated by his woodsy smell
As I whispered, “burn me with your love poison”

The next day I awoke to the sound of crashing waves and thunder
The bed was empty, but his scent lingered on as I looked at his pillow
There was a little note left for me with a red rose, his phone number and a key
It said come join me tonight for a rendezvous as I am now leashed to your dusk
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Empress Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 10:40 AM
Dear Tania, This is one of the best poetic stories iv read in ages. It flows so well, almost like it just wasnt planned but it came to you so naturally, made me wonder, have you published short stories? You have it in you! I think you should publish a book of short stories! I didnt want this to end! Its so beautiful! And I saw through your vivid imagery! Thank you for supporting my contest, Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always ~
Kitchin Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 2:20 PM
Ink, I've been told I am good story teller. Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and my placement. I enjoy your contests.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 9:50 AM
Romance with a capital R. Great ending.
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 1:01 PM
Victor, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:16 PM
A very romantic verse Tania, it begs for a part two. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Tom, thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:59 PM
Fun one! We find rapture in your words!
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Kim, thank you.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 6:02 PM
What a romantic tale woven around your prompts.
Kitchin Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:07 PM
Alison, thank you.
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