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Summer Rain Blues

for days now I've been feeling blue Ashamed from stupid things I do Kicked myself, distraught, knocked down Can't seem to shake this sorry frown I tried with might to halt the force Like caverely marching, men and horse But tears too strong to hold inside came crashing down, a torrid slide And there I stayed for days and days Time ticked by, face unchanged Swathed in dirt and mud and grime Flotsam, jetsam of the mind I lay in darkness and searched for clues On how to stop these summer rain blues And from the thick, jet black cruel night I saw a flicker, a candlelight Alone it stood, so small obtuse Yet the more I stared, the more it grew This tiny flame engulfed the room Illuminating, in full bloom I am the flame that dances tonight Winds will shake me, but I will re-light I am warmth and I am bright I feel happy now, tomorrow firmly in my sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/31/2016 7:48:00 PM
Julia, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:26:00 AM
Wow this was so positive and awesome keep it up
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:36:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, Julia. Welcome to PS - I've learnt a lot about poetry since joining a few months ago and made some nice poet friends : )
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:15:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Julia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:47:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope u have fun and share your many delights in luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:17:00 PM
beautiful.. inspiring lovely read thank you for sharing your poetry. naomi
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