Summer Rain

Gusting winds storm as fiery clouds advance
twisting, turning, blasting air full of heat,
hosting rhythmic jazz, nature's rowdy dance.
Roof's singing in a snappy twirling beat
as windows flash, thunder poses to prance.
Torrential downpour flooding narrow streets,
cars stall, objects fly, water's climbing knees 
amid deafening sound of falling trees.

Tributaries, rivers, rushing downstream.
Watching rain, families gather in glee,
as pets are hiding from the nature's scream.
Soon, the storm begins to fade hastily,
over in blinding speed, like a bad dream.
Sun's shining on hills intermittently.
Roads are draining, people begin to drive
knowing well the next storm could soon arrive.

September 2, 2017
HM: Strand select J contest by Brian Strand
abababcc dededeff rhyme-10 syllables per line
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May Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 5:10 AM
You describe the fury of the storm well Vijay, Very nicely done
Kauffman Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:58 PM
I could see and feel your storm! Having grown up in the northwest I experienced many summer storms and all over again in your poem! Congratulations!
Chaudhary Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:31 AM
You've chosen very beautiful words which is revealed through your poem.
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Harshita..appreciate your comments!
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest..A stormy summer rain is a very scary thing..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Sara!
Smith Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations Vijay, excellent piece...
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Great imagery Vijay congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:37 PM
Thanks Jan--love your comments!
Pett Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, great piece of poetry, :))
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Thank you Roy!
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September 5, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Fantastic poem, Vijay! Congrats. Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Thanks Janice!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Back for congrats!!
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Thanks Kim..congrats on your big win as well !
Roper Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Wonderful with lots of impact on your poem, Vijay, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Thank you Eve.. lovely feedback!
Croft Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:15 PM
congrats!!
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Thanks Karen!
Ashley Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your win with your excellent poem! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Thank you Susan!
Cozart Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Thanks Dale!
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:49 PM
wow, yours is wildly descriptive, Vijay, just LIKE a summer storm!! VERY good entry for the contest!!
Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Vijay, you captured the scene of the catastrophic storm!
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Kim for your lovely feedback!
Sivey Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 4:51 AM
This is a fantastic and intense write my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely poem this morning Vijay! You have enthralled me by your incredible skill at writing this form! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 5:43 AM
Lovely to read your comments this morning, Russell--have a pleasant day!
Wanter Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Can't get the Gulf off my mind - your poem reads like this last week and wonderfully described.
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you SW.. I share your concerns..love your feedback!
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 5:15 PM
wow, this is almost epic, vijay... i like the stark imagery reflected through your lines... it's raining good poetry..huggs
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Thank you nette, for your lovely feedback!
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 4:26 PM
what a summer storm you created Vijay good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Thank you Jan for your lovely comments!
Sands Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 3:40 PM
I love how this poem moved right along Vijay and then entered to the calm of it fading. Very well written. Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Thank you Heidi--appreciate your lovely feedback, as always!
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