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Summer Rain

Summer rage, Sun at its zenith, Umbrellas galore in vivid colours, My skin gets tanned and parched, Munificent , passion steams up in abeyance, Enchanting showers we yearn for, Respite from enigmatic heat is still far off ! Rain, Summer rain take us by surprise, All of us writhe as intense heat waves rise, In your embrace , fury is certain to tranquilise , Neglect scorches the most, cravings vaporise ! Written on 18/6/14 Contest- Summer Acrostic Sponsor- Francine Roberts

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2014 3:37:00 PM

hey, this is quite original, the way you contrasted the heat with the rain. VERY nicely done.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/21/2014 1:43:00 PM

Thanks Andrea !

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/18/2014 7:19:00 AM

for the contest you need to use the whole phrase Summer Rain, for the acrostic, not just the one word "summer"

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/18/2014 7:50:00 AM

Oh my ! Thanks Francine ,, just slipped off my mind ! Infact I had written just on " summer " n later changed the name as desired phrase when read details ,,, n forgot to add it in poem itself !