Summer Pool

Summer Pool
Bikini time fun;
hanging ten by the cool pool,
grinning men enjoy.


Summer Season Senryu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rhinem Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Smile! Are they grinning dear? I bet they are! Smile, "Hello Again, Lovely & Gifted Marie Harrison!!!" ~ I hope that Your life is treating Your Splendors wonerfully ~ And, I love Your images and snapshots of prettiness which Your Brush seems to always paint ~ "Very Lovely" ~ "Love & Warmth to You," John! Smile, let's go view another dear....
Goff Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:21 PM
I love to swim in Minnesota lakes!(brrrrr!!!!) and look lile a wet sasquatch when I drip out!!!! fun poem! Marie! gemini jim
La France Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 2:50 PM
i noticed today, they are working on my apartment pool, opening ,July 1, cannot wait, especially after reading this, better dust off my bikini... love constance
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June 13, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Yikes! I can't imagine me in a bikini. Now, that would get everyone laughing. There's a reason woman over 50 don't wear them. Enjoyed this poem. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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